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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was subtle, but had a really nice flow to it. :)
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i thiught we would of seen sarah in this chapter must be in the next one can't wait to see what happens keep up the good work
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16
That was a very nice moment there with Jean and Ororo I really liked it and Logan tryign to help her out with her wanting to go into another field of study was nice to see too and I can't wait until X23 shows up next now THAT I got to see.
That was a very nice moment there with Jean and Ororo I really liked it and Logan tryign to help her out with her wanting to go into another field of study was nice to see too and I can't wait until X23 shows up next now THAT I got to see.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chpater can't wai to read the next chapter
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the Kitty and Peter shippiness! Their moments alone together are incredibly erotic. Really sensual, but emotional too. Good to see that they are written in character, AND get to show their passionate sides. I think all the couples should get to explore their hidden fantasies! Great story.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this! I need time to read more of it, but what I've read so far has been great. The lovemaking is beautifully described. At first I thought it was weird to read an X-men fic where the X-men have no powers...but then you just get used to it and it still feels like the characters are authentic. Nice work!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was bored sitting around so I got around to reading the chapter. You could always use more jott, haha. Lovely as always. :)
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15
Very nice set up to the next chapter although I was expecting more goodbye sex from the other couples.
Very nice set up to the next chapter although I was expecting more goodbye sex from the other couples.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter seems like evrything is all right with scotts perents for jean going to theres for thanks givening can't wait to see what happens next
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14
Hey they can't all be sex and I'm glad to see ya managed to do this while recovering from the dental surgery. I like how this showed Rogue and Jean's veiws on their relationships since they're the only ones unsure about them.
I can't wait until the thanksgiving thing with Scott's family and maybe they'll FINALLY admit that they got a real relationship going and can't wait till Jean interacts with that family I know she'll love them and will feel closer to them then her own family.
Hey they can't all be sex and I'm glad to see ya managed to do this while recovering from the dental surgery. I like how this showed Rogue and Jean's veiws on their relationships since they're the only ones unsure about them.
I can't wait until the thanksgiving thing with Scott's family and maybe they'll FINALLY admit that they got a real relationship going and can't wait till Jean interacts with that family I know she'll love them and will feel closer to them then her own family.