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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20
Nice to see them back and I loved their reactions to Jean's story about her thanksgiving. Plus I think this was the first time we actually got to see Pietro and we hear about Crystal, will we see them at the end? Plus nice to see a few things are being brough out and loved Kurt and Wanda's little bit at the end. Keep up the good work.
Nice to see them back and I loved their reactions to Jean's story about her thanksgiving. Plus I think this was the first time we actually got to see Pietro and we hear about Crystal, will we see them at the end? Plus nice to see a few things are being brough out and loved Kurt and Wanda's little bit at the end. Keep up the good work.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew I recognized the song, but I was a little drugged to think straight, cursed flu bug. Loved the way the conversations flowed in 18, loved 19 even more (Jott smut! Need anyone ask? :D)
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i can't wait to see when jean and scott leave
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
You know I loved this. Therefore you don't need I tell it explicitly. Anyway I'll tell it: I loved this.
Please, write more. I don't understand how anyone -ANYONE!- can read this history and not fall in love with Scott and Jean -and Lo and Ro, of course- straight after.
By the way, I like how the relationship between those two lovebirds is progressing: slowly but steadily.
And I hope Betsy meets Warren soon, before she lose it. Heh. I can imagine Betsy and Warren sitting around a table and across Scott and Jean, muttering awkwardly they have become an item. And Jean guffawing, telling neither she has troubles with it nor they need her approval, and wishing them much happiness.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
Nice two solid sex scenes and a nice little ending to the Thanksgiving part of this. I assume it's the ending at least. Maybe the next one is saying goodbye and everyone catching up over the weekend. Personally I can't wait until they both just admit their feelings. I also wonder if there will be a few special 'welcome backs' between a few of the couples.
Nice two solid sex scenes and a nice little ending to the Thanksgiving part of this. I assume it's the ending at least. Maybe the next one is saying goodbye and everyone catching up over the weekend. Personally I can't wait until they both just admit their feelings. I also wonder if there will be a few special 'welcome backs' between a few of the couples.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter jean seems to like scotts family really alot if you ask me can't wait to see what happens next
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13
Well, Scott knows DEFINITELY methods to relief stress. Heh. Good building, great description of the act and excellent character exploration. Although it's a pity Jean and her mother can't get along well.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14
Talks among the girls are always funny. Really I have to commend you on it. And the conversation between Scott and 'Dad' Logan was really humorous. Ugh, I can't imagine my father encouraging me to please my girlfriend.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15
Does Betsy really need a boyfriend, right? I hope Warren comes soon to rescue her from her sour cynism. I'm sure of her friends will thank it. By the way, Kurt's phrase was very good. It really fits his character.
The Kitty/Piotr scene was nice, specially to those of your readers aren't Jott-biased. Of course I'm perfectly satisfied with Jott.
Rogue's life is being very complicated, isn't it? I hope she can fix her troubles.