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I just read your review for my story! THANK YOU SO MUCH, and I can't wait until you update next. I love this story so much, I can't wait to see how Jean's family reacts to Scott. I can't wait to read your version of it. I'll update "My Immortal" as soon as I can. I had a lot written for the next chapter but I went back and read it over tand realized what I had was shit so I tossed it all. UPDATE SOON!!

I love it! Good to see some Wanda and Kurt action in there! COOL! I know this story mainly revolves around Jean and Scott...but I was hoping for a bit more Romy! PLEASE! I lvoe them! Since they have gotten together they sem to have died out in the story, and I have the perfect suggestion to spice up their particular sotry. Here it is...I was thiking that maybe a teacher...or a student...could start harrasing her...but Rogue, being the stubborn girl she is wants to handel it on her own. Slowely though it starts getting really bad ...so she starts to pull away from everyone again...including Remy. Well...one day...BOOM!...she gets raped...by that guy...teacher/student, no one knows becasue she hasn't told anyone. I know that sounds mean, but sometimes Rogeu and Remy's realtionship seems purly about the sex and nothign really deeper THis way...Rogue become somewhat scared of sex and now we have to see if their relationship can survive with their whole dynamic of thoer relationship changed!! WHAT DO YOU THINK? Too much? Does it suck. Now I don't want to take the focus off of Jean and Scott...I like them being the center pf attention. Maybe you can have this going on in the background...like you did with the whole Rogue and Remy relationship blossoming and no one knew. If you don't like it...then that is cool! You probably already have this story written and finished. I thought I would just suggest it! If you like it then fel free to contact me. I don't wanto to co-write it or anything. I just want to know if you would use the idea. This story is ALL you and I don't want to take that away. Just htought I would give a sussestion...hope I didn't offend! duckducote22@yahoo.com
ANyway...Love it! Love it! Can't wait to see what you have in store for Betsy!? Could Warren be entering hte story?!?! HMMMM?
I lvoe Warren! He's a hottie!
Update soon! Can't wait.

Poor Scott, he seems to be freaking out! Xavier/Mags was well done. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for Scott! ^^;

Lol! What a perfect and unforgetable birthday gift!

Meeting the future in-laws! It wouldn't be so scary if they're NOT meeting Elaine Grey. That evil woman has the tendency to ruin a perfectly good Jott! But then where's the fun if there isn't any 'confict' between them :) And I'm sure you'll be able to write that scene just as awesome as the rest of your stories are! Really looking forward to the next chapter!

great chapter my friend

Hahaha, Birthday Sex! I've done that for a boyfriend before ::cracks up:: woo, that takes me back ::slips off into memory lane:: @_@ oh, right...sooooooo, Scott's gonna meet Jean's Family, eh? Good luck to him! lol, can't wait for an update!

WOW! very good indeed i can't wait for Scott to meet Jean's parents. I always enjoy writing scenes like that for some reason, (probably because i love Scott so much) but update as soon as you can and i'll do the same with "My Immortal"

Chapter 28

Well that was an interesting chatper lol, although I had wished you actually showed the reaction, that would have been great to see and it's a real shame you just overlooked it. But I can't wait for him ot meet Jean's family I suspect a blow out in the works and a lot of yelling and Jean and Scot storming out early lol.

Scott is one brave soldier lol! Loved this chapter. Now, if it was turned into a comic...;)

Oh, wow! This is definitely the best Jott fic ever! I'm glad I finally have the time to check it out. It took me like a couple of days to read it til chapter 27, but it definitely worth the time. This fic has everything a good story needs!

Scott and Jean's meeting was done perfectly. And you can tell right away that they're gonna be a great couple from the chemistry between them :) I'm glad to know that it didn't take long for them to realise their mutual attractions for each other. Logan and Ororo being Scott's parents was truly original! I like the idea of Scott was an ex-marine, though I think the Air Force would make it sounds cooler :)

Their previous lovers, wow! Duncan and Taryn? Lol! You tried to include every character in your story, didn't you? Emma being the one to break Scott's heart was great! I like her in this story of yours.

Betsy, Betsy... hmm, that was quite a chapter you wrote there. And I'm glad everything turns out for the better. What could be happening next? Will there be a wedding / double weeding / triple wedding etc... in this story? *hints hints* =D