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for Done Waiting

by Ashnan

person Jags
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very hot and you must keep writing
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost burst into tears. Touching and hot.
person Samantha
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I hope you plan on writing more to that!
person SyXX
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic!
person Karen
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Logan was lying on his back, one arm curved above his head. Marie gently pulled the cover down his body, watching for any signs that he might be waking up. Thanking the lord above that Logan slept naked, she allowed her gaze to wonder over his body. He must have been having one hell of a good dream. There was no way he was that big all the time. She was glad that she wasn’t completely a virgin, just a technical-virgin. Her dildo, Mini-Logan, hadn’t prepared her for Logan’s true form. Maybe she should have purchased the giant novelty one.

**So in a way - Logan - was her 'first'. *g* Loved the image of her giving his bod the onceover. Oh yeah.
person allieg
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, any chance you have done some more? (hint hint)
really i love them.
person Blue
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN. Very hot. Loved it. Sequel? Please??
person Emmy
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was hot. Noticed a couple of easily fixable mistakes. Email me if you'd like a beta. :)