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for left outside alone

by allieg

person Ashnan
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, Jean is such a BITCH! How I hate her. She is just as bad in the comics. Dying is like a vaction for her. She always comes back. Someone kill that bitch off already! Okay, sorry, I'm a Jean-hater.

I love the story. Keep going.
person daygonna
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the new jean...it makes it so easy for me to hate her (im not a jean lover, cant u tell) but poor rogue, having to hear jean talk shit about getting logan...well plz update soon! ill be waiting
person of no importance
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLLY SHIT was the first thing that came to mind when i read those last few sentences. i sure as hell didn't see that coming. can't wait for an update.
person daygonna
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so naunty, i loved this chapter though...cant wait until u update again, hope the new guy doesnt bring up too much of a problem
person Patricia16
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it ya must update it Please e-mail me when u update PLEASE!!!!!!
person daygonna
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again. great chapter! i cant wait for the next one to see how rogue takes this ^_^. ill be waiting
person Ashnan
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next update! This is great. Keep going.
person limar
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think the chapter should be longer
format settings would be better if you have microsoft office use that play around with it and get the story to look cleaner(?) if you need help leave a message at the end of the story and i will try to help you
i think you could use a beta
otherwise it's very good
person Ashnan
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person daygonna
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugh! a cliffy, how horrible. well plz plz update soon...i think u should make it up to us for leaving the chapter like that