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for Indecent Obsession

by Karen

person Ashnan
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, could you please update this. Pretty, pretty, please? Pllllllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

I have really been waiting to see what happens next!
person Abril
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sucks to be Jean, but hey why not just break up with him, instead she sets herself up for this. Wonder is Rogue would go through it? Would Scott? This is a strange setting, but very a intrigue one. Hurry back.
person kiki
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoo i like your story so much. in the first i thought rogue and scott that can´t go well. you showed my otherwise. thanks.

oh and i hope you will update soon. i´d like to read a little more "action".

kiki
person Mechell_VanPatten
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really Really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to be added. Please Please Please add it soon or I am going to go crazy!!!!!!!!
person Ashnan
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES! YES! *jumping up and down* YES! Another chapter...Karen posted another chapter!

I love it, love it, love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. (Okay, so I'm pushy. I know it, you know it. Not gonna change it.)

Oh, Scott gets to get some Rogue lurve goin' on! And Logan get's to be thoroughly pissed off by Scott. Oohhhh...I'm so excited!

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for updating!!!!!!!!
person Ashnan
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm still desperately waiting for another chapter. Please. I love your stories. I really need an update. Did I mention PLEASE!
person bored with idiots
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmm....towel, please. Waiting anxiously for the update.

BWI
person Evilerk
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's so funny that he can't win even in the VR world...love this story so far...I can't wait to see what happens next..more please
person Ashnan
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Take that Jean! You are not "Ms. It". Sorry, but I HATE Jean Grey. Always have, always will. Her comic verse character is really annoying.

Anyway, I love this!! Xavier is so cute. :) This is just building so much tension. I love it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating. When I came on and saw a new chapter, I actually sqealed in my excitement. I am a grown woman with teenage children. I should never squeal (unless I partaking of certain activities involving my hunky husband).

Update soon! I know, I'm never happy, and I'm demanding. :) Update soon.
person Dream for Chapter 3
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such an amazing chapter! The threesome...Oh man, was that great. Totally loved that. It also helps that this is so well written and the idea is great as well. Keep up the amazing work ^.^