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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Logan in a thong".
Good god, I probably laughed for ten minutes on that single little phrase. Very awesome story, very well written. Your character is quite likeable, especially her sense of humor. =)
Good god, I probably laughed for ten minutes on that single little phrase. Very awesome story, very well written. Your character is quite likeable, especially her sense of humor. =)
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bow to you! Not only is there decent plot connecting all the good stuff, but the smuttiness gets better every time! ;-; That's hard to find. Thank goodness your plot promises several more chapters.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely wonderful. It is well written, the story itself is engrossing, and yet there is plenty of lemony goodness to go around. keep writting!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very long awesome update.
You had me blushing, and squealing with delight. The Passion fruit was genius. Very hot and I very funny, so so hot!!! Can't wait for the next update. Got to love the Cajun, that would have been a sight to see. :)
You had me blushing, and squealing with delight. The Passion fruit was genius. Very hot and I very funny, so so hot!!! Can't wait for the next update. Got to love the Cajun, that would have been a sight to see. :)
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm, this is the best romy fiction I think I have ever read on this site!!!! I can't wait for chapter 4 to come.
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for writing such a great fic, this is one of the best stories I have read on this site! It's got plot, humour and sexiness without it being too smutty or pointless "lets just get them to bonk". When's the next chapter coming? I can't wait to read it.
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute, creative, funny and sexy- I love it!!! Is there gonna be more?
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. More please ( Big Smile with puppy eyes) PLEASE!!!!!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT STORY!!! CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE!!!!!
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For CH1
Interesting beginning. The four first sounded like guardian angels, but with one of them being only 2,000+, I think they're something else...guardian spirits? Hirane was mentioned and dismissed quickly, but I have to wonder if it's not going to be more of a problem then the guardians are expecting. The sense of humor in this chapter is quirky, what will this Matilda put the clueless couples through?
Interesting beginning. The four first sounded like guardian angels, but with one of them being only 2,000+, I think they're something else...guardian spirits? Hirane was mentioned and dismissed quickly, but I have to wonder if it's not going to be more of a problem then the guardians are expecting. The sense of humor in this chapter is quirky, what will this Matilda put the clueless couples through?