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Since I haven't reviewed in a while I just wanted to en courage you to up date as soon as you're able this is on e of the best stories I've read on this site or others.I am currently haveing some writers block and an djust wanted you to know that I will keep checking back for more updates as often as I can. P.S. Matilda seems a bit smitten with the prof so is there a chance he will get some lovein in this story ? He always seems to be left out in these fanfics(except for Magneto Prof pairing . . . eww!)Oh well, I'll review again when you post a new chapter until then thank you for the great story , Jason

Great Story! Please continue writing more. Your style of writing is spectacular, which is only made more stupendous by the rich plot driven story and not to mention the nice flowing back and forth scenes.

You have to continue this story man! It's friggin awesome!

once again, a masterfully crafted chapter. Having a god of bad timing makes a lot of sense, even though i was begining to think it wasn't so easy to manipulate fate. and for god's sake HURRY with the next chapter, i'm getting crazy.

O___O .....*drools*..... Oh my... I really do love this fan fic! Very yummy! And it has a plot!!!!
I crave more of this wonderful fan fic! Gimmimoregimmimoregimmimoregimmimore
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gimmimoregimmimoregimmimoregimmimoregimmimoregimmimoregimmimore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Gasps for air*
....Please? ^____^

Oh man that was another wicked chapter please write more espiecially about kitty and kurt and i cant wait to read your next chapter

Holy Hell!! Once again White-Orchid you have outdone yourself. Anouther great chapter filled with passion, longing, outright lust, anger, fear, happiness, and even a squad of snoring Jamies. Matilda is once again the source of most of my amusment. From changing clothes to booting the God of Bad Timing out of her hair, she seems to add a whole new look to the world of Evolution. I would have to say that this is a great chapter in a line of already great chapters. Kudos for the use of Invader ZIM,(Ride the pig, Gir! Ride the Pig.) Spirited Away, and several good books, Grendal and Turn the Screw.

By the way I didn't get to sleep this morning until 6a.m. because of the wonderful story I was reading. It was worth the lack of sleep just to read this chapter. And I would gladly do it again when the next chapter is done. So once again I stand and cheer for White-Orchid and her muses. Yahh, WOo hoo, Yippee, etc, etc.....

Holy shit man that was a good story so dont stop there please keep going and write about their survival trip wow that was honestly one of the best stories i have ever read your great man keep it up

To answer your question, Yes I love the Story. It is extreamly well written. Keep up the Great work. Can't wait to read more, soon.

Sorry for the second review, I just got done reading the whole thing. The first review was written just after
that hilarious part, and I was so excited to say something that I went right here, lmao. Not trying to spam
or anything.

So...A more in-depth review. As I've said, your character has a very likable personality. I do believe she's
said some of the best lines I've ever seen on here =). The story was a joy to read, especially the naughty
bits, hehe. The fruit idea still has me in a gleeful mood, it was so much fun. There -is- one thing that's in
the negative, but just the one. See, large sizes for guys is very, very common on AFF. Seeing a repeat put
me off a bit. Remy I could understand, but Kurt has such a lean build in the Evolution show I'd think he'd be
more towards average. They don't have to be gigantic to be sexy =>. Just keep that in mind if you're wanting
to write future stories. I'm probably not the only one bothered by these sorts of typical things.

So, in all, I loved the story. Update soon. =D