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Hey, White Orchid! I LOVE your fanfic! You are one of the few writer's that actually has a great plot to your story (most are just sex and no plot or more sex and little plot). I am very impressed with the natural flow of the story in general and hope you will update soon (I'm a BIG fan of Remy/Rogue and Kitty/Kurt and it's just beautiful the way the two are combined into one). I just recently discovered this fic and I would like to attempt to draw some fan art for it. Keep up the great work!

OMFG, I seriously LOVE this story. This is the first X-men based fanfic I have ever read...and I must say...I could not have picked a better one! Rogue is my all time favorite X-Men...and even in the original X-Men I always pictured her with Gambit. They are just sex appeal and a match made in heaven! So I am glad that this pair is one of the main two. Kitty is cute too and Kurt is very adorable. I think they would make a cute couple.

I like how your limes have been tasteful and not raunchy. Well done! I hope your computer gets well soon...I know mine is my life support system. If my computer were to die...I think I would too! LOL. I can't wait to see how Matilda is going to get those 4 to open up to each other and give in to their desires. I am dying for those lemons! ;)

I am totally liking this. Started reading it a couple of days ago, but I'm with you; a college student with barely enough time on my hands to do anything fun. I like you plot (I love plot) and what a plot it is!! Its such a good idea. The two pairs are SO perfect for each other and you (or Matilda) is bringing them together in the coolest way. ^_^ Second, I like the fact that you actually write and write well. I've only been on AFF for a couple of weeks I think, and a lot of what I see here is not all that good. Like sentences not beginning with capitalization, missing punctuation, multiple misspellings and overall pretty crappy writing. But yours, yours is a sweet relief. My third like is how you keep the characters so in character! I feel almost as if I'm watching it when I read your story. Also enjoying the lack of swear words. I don't like them, and you use the few that you do in a very good manner. And last, I love how you have typed out Remy, Rogue and Kurt's speach patterns. *Applauds*

One thing I would like to see - translate what Remy says in French and what Kurt says in German? I usually get the gist of it, but not always.

Update soon!!

Hey i know exactly how you feel I have these two stories on ff.net that I try and try to update, but between school and work it is sooo hard. But you are awesome and I love your story specially cuz it has Romy and you have me liking Kurtty now too! lol tankie for the authors note I was getting worried

OMG, I absolutely LOVE your story! I can't wait for you to post the next chapter. So much stuff happens in one chap that it took me over 5 hours to read all of them. (What, with all the juice, hotpocket, download, tv and bathroom breaks I took lol) Hmm...I wonder how our goddess will handle this problem. BTW; I do agree with Rogue about Remy's eyes, they are the best part of him.
~KD

OK here is why I love your story soooo much.^_^ Its clean, not in the smut free sense but in the error free sense. The spelling is good, the story doesn't jump from point to point, it has depth, feeling and soul. And god know how much I love a good story. I.E. I just read a 1000 pages last week. Good books just suck me in. You know your characters, back to front. Your OC is not some overpowered uber mutant with a hard on for everything that walks. The plot is thought out and well presented. Just like a great book it pulls you in and makes you want more. That why I love your story. I will wait the time required for finish the next chapters with the knowlage that I have helped you in some small way.


So Sayeth...WitchKing Ph34r

very good story so far! Can't wait to read the rest of it! Keep up the good work and I hope your comp is feeling better soon! LOL
Bites'n'Nibbles

OH PLEASE!!! PLease update I beg you please do, please do!!!!

That was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!! You have to finish it!!!!!

love it! NEXT PLEASE!!!!