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for The Bounty Hunter

by teeyah

person Catchfire
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All right your back!!!! I keep checking for more of your story but haven't seen any in a long time. So I'm really glad to see more now. I can't wait until the next part. Man what a surprise ending. I never would have suspected Hector of foul play. When I saw it the first thing that went through my head was that it wasn't him but Mystique in his form. Are you sure that it wasn't Mystique anyway? Because it really doesn't seem like Hector to do that. Especially since he helped get the passport and stuff for Marie and send her to the one safe place there is for her. With the
X-Men. Unless he did it in order to get Logan out of the way. So that it would be easier to capture her on the way to the X-Men. And if he had said anyplace else was safe when it wasn't then Logan would have been able to smell the lie on him, wouldn't he? Anyway great story I just love it and I can't wait to see more of it. Keep up the GREAT WORK!!!!
person Devonshirelass
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous chapter! I enjoyed reading this, and look forward to reading more! I like the possesive Logan too. So I look forward to the next chapter!
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_o
plz continue soon!
person Abril
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, why did Hector do? Or is it Hector?

Come back, Logan has to hurry up and get back in time to help her.
person Thebigguy
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! one hell of a story! I love every chapter of this fic. please please update soon
person MarzBar
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEK!! Is Logan going to get back in time or will he have to track her down? Killing Hector the next priority? Good suspense here. Please don't make us wait too long.
person MarzBar
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOW!! Gotta smoke now! Fabulous, juicy smut with one of my very favorite males in fanfic. More soon please!
person Greenleaf
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I'm so sorry for not reviewing!! Just got your e-mail!!! That sucks ff.net took you off.. Oh, well. I remember seeing you erased from my favorite's list and wondered what the hell had happened!! So, since you know that I reviewed these chaps already, I'll just leave nice little comments so that little box fills up with reviews!! I don't have time right now, but I'll be back soon!! Should I add my story here? If you want to check it out at ff.net it is called Twilight and Shadow. It is a Harry Potter fic, Severus Snape and Hermione Granger are the pairings if it is your cup of tea. If not oh well. What was the last chapter you had at fanfic? I can't remember...
person Pisquenta
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! This just keeps getting better and better!! I can't wait til you update again!! Loving it all!
person allieg
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, cant wait for the next chapter.