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YOW!! That was a spot of proper violence! I'm sure Mystique deserves it but GADZ! I hope it did some good and he found out something worthwhile. More soon please.

Wow, read all your chapters in one go. And, wow, I can't wait for more! You're writing style is incredible, it just pulls the reader in, description is lovely -- have you been to Mexco? And great sex scenes, wonderfully mixed with character and emotions and all that good stuff! Beautiful, flows perfectly, tension and relationship well developed and well-timed. Very impressed, very impatient for the rest. WTF is gonna happen to Marie?

Oh...my...God! *Catches breath* This frickin' rocked! *Hugs Blue Morpho* Wow the plot definetely did pick up, & it left me absolutely flabbergasted! Waiting for this chapter was a definetely worth waiting for. *Growls* Damn Hector, what a bastard, you definetely made it believable, what with him changing his moods/showing his true colours, & the blue skinned woman! When Hector's skin changed blue & you wrote this one line: "the scales radiating outward in large blotches until they covered his entire body…

…her entire body."

-I felt a shiver up my spine, but's its all good coz' this story is really starting to rock! Aaaaah hunger pains...must...*groan* read...chapter *puff*...17...cannot *tear* go on...lol. Please please hurry! I am hooked!!! PLEASE HURRY!!! :D

Banshee Queen.

Great story. Hot sex. Interesting premise. I love AU's and this is a great one. Can't wait to see what Logan does to Mystique.

thanks for the update ... it was a good chapter albiet a little shorter then usual, one question though, with Logans enhanced senses wouldn't he have been able to smell mystique was in the room, and that she took Marie? Hopefully the next chapter will hold the answers. Keep it comming

love this story.. happy you're back :)

Oh dear! Now that Logan's been stupid and gotten drunk, it will be much harder for him to track Marie. I am glad to hear that Logan wasn't a bad judge of character with Hector. More soon please.

oooo! i love this story i just recently found it and haven't been able to stop reading
i love the plot line and can't wait for you to update

This story is amazing!! It has kept my interest the entire time and even the sex scenes are great (a difficult task in my opinion). You can't leave me hanging like this! Hurry with the next chapter!!

*Shudders* Oooooo I am still shivering from the last chapter you wrote! Finally finally you posted on another chapter, I was beginning to think that you had given up all together which would've been an absolute waste of talent. :) Anyway, I just wanted to say how great this chapter was! I loved it! Slowly but surely the story is unravelling to become something even greater than I had expected. I absolutely 100% fell in love with the way Hector uttered that one immortal line; “No need to thank me, Rogue,” Hector replied coolly. *Squeals with delight* As soon as I read that my heart seriously froze right then and there, and I knew the chapter was gonna' end with a twist. Keep writing! For the love of God keep writing I am hooked! I've saved your story to my comp and often I go back to read it, its that good. I love it! Please please please hurry with the next chapter, I can't wait! For weeks on end I waited till' you posted another chapter and for a little while it was kinda sad cause' I thought you had given up. But the waiting has payed off and the chapter even better than I had imagined! I will be eagerly awaiting for the next.

Your Most Loyal Fan,

Banshee Queen.