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December 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What happens when they get home??? Great story, hope.to read more!!!
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh that was good! you should probably place a simi-noncon rating on it though. definitely needs a sequel/continuation!
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ach! You're killing me here! This is definitely the best story I have read of Logan/Marie. I've read it countless times. Will you continue?? Please do!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! I loved it.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, hope you continue. I like how he is agressive and she submissive. And is she submissive because she has to be? Or because she wants to be? Sounds like she was kind of enjoying it too.
Good work :)
Good work :)
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I'm definitely interested to see what happens next. Although I'm not entirely sure I like, "mean Logan" I think I like "sweet and silently brooding Logan" better. LOL. But "mean Logan" or not, I think you've done a fab job so far and I hope you decide to continue (maybe Logan can get less nasty the more they get to know each other! ;o) Just a thought!)
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It showed promise, however if you don't add more to the story it comes off a more of a rape. Creative though.
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you were attempting to make Logan seem like a pathetic jerk, You've succeeded...
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
silly Logan,when that collar comes off...well,payback's a bitch
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*thumbs up* Awesome work, chicka! Lets get another story goin'! ;)