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for The Camping Trip

by jukeboxcsi

person Mystik Serena
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a very interesting read ^^ and well written, I very much enjoyed reading this.

As to your French, as far as I know, but I don't know the Cajun version of the language, so it could be a dialect thing, but "qui" is "who", and "quoi" is "what."
person BJ
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jb... I LOVE this story! Enough said. :)
person Sandy
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was such a sweet ending! I was actually kinda sad it's over. Maybe you'll write about their next vacation? Hmm?
person Sandy
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wai!Wai!Wai! LOVE IT! Love it soooo much! Update soon. Gotta find out what happens. Leave the flamers fuckless! Mwhaha more for me ^-^ Yummy Logan/Remy goodness.
person .
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's not flaming to tell the truth. The truth is, this story is awful. Remy would not behave this way. Neither would Logan. But I guess if you don't care about continuity or being true to the characters, this story's wonderful...so why is it called X-men fanfiction again?
person .
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dreadful. Awful. And not just for the French, either.
person dragonclaw21974
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this fic today, and I really like it. Please continue soon.
person marcyleecorgan
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeee! *bounce bounce* I am loving this! I think I'll add this to my list of stories to read when I think I might like to go camping. :)
person BJ
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jb! I just spent the morning rereading this one too. God, i love the way you write. i love all the little details, i love the way you write Remy, and Logan... they come alive (I wish!) in your stories. I'm not just saying that because your a friend, I'm saying it because it's true! How 'bout another chapter of Origins while you're waiting to win your Adamantium Award?
person Laura
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two more great chapters (7+8) in this interesting story.

The detail is the thing in this fic, I think; the various bits of bushcraft that Remy has to use etc. And the puma added some excitement. The best bit though, imo, is the way that you show the emotional bond between Remy and Logan - a quite literal bond thanks to Remy's empathy - and the way Remy looks after Logan.

Looking forward to more chapters soon. It will be interesting to see what happens now that Logan is reviving. I doubt he will be a happy camper (no pun intended) ;p