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for She Walks In Beauty

by bamfchickie

person Ryo
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read this several weeks ago, and have been so busy working on me own PotC fanfic, that I forgot to post my review. So, here it is: DAMN!!! :-D I'll be honest I never saw the Logan/Ororo possibilities, but after reading this, thank GAWD I saw the light. It's humorous, sexy, action-packed--very nicely coordinated sequences, by the way. Not once did I sit and pull the Scooby-Doo face because I was confused. Once I started, it was hard for me to stop (darn neor sor sleep and food, you know). I see you started a sequel but haven't done anything with it. WHY???? How can you just leave a sista hanging like ? ;? ;-) Just kidding. Seriously, I do hope you continue; your writing is on part with some of the best. GOOD JOB!!!
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I never really considered Ororo and Logan as a couple, but I couldn't pass up a story called "She Walks In Beauty." Twas was an awesome story, nicely written, and dare I say--sweet? :) The plot and storyline (or are those the same thing?) are planned out very well, and the side story with Rogue and Gambit makes it all the more interesting.
person Pretty Pink Kitty
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much I enjoyed your story. It was beautifully written and you kept everyone in character. I'm impressed! I give you a ten out of ten.

Pretty Pink Kitty
=^.^=
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy! I thought I lost this when FF.net kicked all NC-17 out! I love this story!
person ingrid
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Have you considered writing a story about Rogue and Gambit's relationship? after their first mission. you left an open door for that possibility when he went to rescue her from Santrok
person Katie
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! How much do I love this story?? This is the sweetest thing I have ever read, whenever I do I get so completely lost in it!! I so wanna be Ororo in this,lol! This is absolutely amazing, and I'm sure the sequel will be just as good!:)
person Jerryn
schedule May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow. That was one of the best fanfics I have ever read in my entire life. You are a superb writer and I can't wait to start the sequel story you wrote to this one. I was a little sketical about it first, because it was so long and there were so many chapters, but thank god I read it. In fact I didn't want it to end. You captured the characters perfectly, and I wouldnt be surprised if this story was made into an actual movie. And I loved the ending, I'm glad you didn't end it in the traditional tragic way. I applaud you.
person Bellergorin
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very well done
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
takes a long time to finish reading it, but is really good touching and moving. I love your story but try not to be so long next time and is really excellent. I mean it !!!!!
person Saki
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so well written and intruiging I had to review. It took me forever to read all the chapters, but it was worth it. Ororo and Logan's relationship was realistic and very romantic. Nice job.