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for Lemonade

by bamfchickie

person Anon
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear God! That was pretty much amazing. You are a really talented writer. Keep it up. (No pun intended.)
person GaiaMalfoy
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gags* *dies* *melts into puddle on floor* *resolidifies long enough to talk* i have officially found my new favorite peice of pwp!!!!!! *melts into puddle on floor again* *resolidifes enough to talk again* see, that's how hot this is!!!! *melts one last time* *sinks into carpet* eurgh. that's gonna be hard to clean.
person Lanette24
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not all about lemonade, eh? Very nicely done. You handled things well, and the angst and mental foreplay
was what made the story. Tone it down with Logan's growling though. And for once I would like to see a
more gentle side to him. Rough sex can get played out, you know? Bravo!