rate_review Reviews

I decied to re write my review after reading the comments on your story. First, I would like to say there's nothing wrong with rough sex. I would imagine the charcter Logan liking his sex that way. Logan is my favorite charcter from the X-Men, and loving the Wolverine comics as well, him being kinky, domintive and liking it hardcore while being devilish sexy fit him to a T. Storm and Logan are a perfect match. The relationship with him and Jean I would say is getting old and I too think it about time he goes for Storm. Not sounding mean or anything but how could he not see how beautiful Storm is????? Jean as nothing on Storm. Storm is exotic in every sense of the word. Where as for Jean is boring compare to Storm. So yeah, please keep on writing about Storm and Logan. It would be fun to read a fic where their training each other and it leans into something MUCH MORE than just training.

God Damn! Reading that makes me wanna stop writing altogether and I don't mean that in a bad way. It's just that this is one of the absolute best erotic fanfics I've had the pleasure of reading. Wolvie and Ororo forever! [Fanboyish squeal] Seriously though, good job my friend. Don't worry I'm gonna keep writing so maybe one day I can put something out there like this. Later.

I read this story some time ago and today I read it for the first time in a good while and it still takes my breath away!!
So unbelievably erotic and sexy!!! One of the best PWP stories I have ever read!!!

Oy vey! That was . . . hot. Very hot.

Okay, okay; reaction's over. I absolutely love the way you write the X-characters. Its so true to the way they are in their worlds, just with sex involved, and you manage to write the two together without being AU in nature.

Oh, yeah, and I was totally alternating between laughing my ass off and being turned on; seriously, the Truth or Dare game. . . I could barely read through it, I was laughing so hard (OMG, "I'm a little teapot". . . I'll never get over that one. . . and its a good idea for future alcohol-induced T/D games *winks*).

You absolutely HAVE to continue doing what you do. Ciao and g'luck!

Gosh what a story extremely well written and soooo exciting to read. it's officially a favourite!

Libby, you are, by far, my most favorite Ro/Lo author! I have loved every story you have ever written about these two. Marvel Comics should come to you for story advice. :) This one was hot and steamy, just the way I like it! I have to disagree with a few of the previous posters. 1) There is no way that rough sex could EVER be played out, especially when we are talking about sex with Logan and 2)Logan is a fictional character and this is your own interpretation im, im, so if you want him to have a 9 inch penis, then that's your prerogative. You'll definitely be getting no complaints from me. ;) So, long story short, this was a really good fic! Brava!

This is my fave Ororo/Logan story so far.

What an amazing fic! I loved it. Rough sex is the best, so i have heard.

First off, I think this is a well-written fic. It seems you put a lot of time and effort into making it a compelling story, and for that I am impressed. So few people bother to even check their spelling that it is always something of a surprise to find a fic like this. I do have a few notes, though, but they're not all critical. *smiles*

Healing factor warding off alcohol--Good! Seems a few people don'ke tke that into account when playing around with the old-friends-drinking-together X-men routine.
Jea Jean's characterization when she was drunk seemed good...I can see that exterior of hers melting into her
teenage self again with enough alcohol behind it. At least in the comic (if I remember rightly, it's been a long while) she had something of an idealized childhood and was always a sort of good-natured, carefree girl. She was for awhile there, anyway.

Lots of good, belieavble lines "I can't believe you're doing it, either...I sure as hell wouldn't."
Also the "and miss the chance to see you make an ass of yourself?"
Seems right on with Scott and Wolverine's dynamic

I think I'd be pissed if someone ripped my silk gown in half, no matter how sexy I thought he was. Just a little complaint, and I'm picky sometimes.

They are having sex in the living room of the mansion? I found that a little odd, considering
(at least if you watch te movie) kids seem to be wandering through there quite a bit at night


Over nine inches? Lost me a little on the believability score there. I know some guys are
quite capable of that length, but it's so few that I guess it threw me off a touch.

Just a personal pet peeve...not too fond of the word vagina, or anus for that matter.
Too clinical somehow. However, since I find the issue of good terminology is one of the most annoying, nebulous things abwritwriting erotica, I'm not sure what else would sound good there. At least with these terms we know exactly what is going on.

Maybe this is just me, but that kind of manuever (the thrusting in suddenly) sounds like it
would hurt, at least at first. Especially with a cock that big.

Had a hard time picturing the change from missionary to on their sides.


There we go, that's it! Hope you keep writing...it seems you can only get better. This was good.