rate_review Reviews

I was entranced by this story - by it's poetry. The pairing is...is portrayed with a beautiful symmetry that I had never considered. How both of them can never be truly naked around a person without killing them. Really...I'm a little at a loss for words at how much I enjoyed this, at it's compelling power that draws the reader along to the conclusion. Short, but the kind of thing that stays with you. It belongs in the upper echelons of fics I have read here.
When I saved a copy of this to my computer (a copy lest it is ever removed from the web - hope you don't mind) I kinda did a little light editing. Nothing major a little light grammar correction, just a few words changed (ex. a few 'then's deleted) that I felt disrupted the rhythm of the story; and the correct English translation of the lyrics: You are so big, make me small/Your the master, make me crawl becomes Your size makes me small /You may be my punisher which I feel fits a bit better (what with the whipping and all). I was just letting you know - maybe seeing if you wanted to see it, though now I feel a bit silly saying it.
Really I love your story, and look forward to reading others by you. Kudos.

beyond weird but so good

Good story, I liked the unusual paring. I could give you the German lyrics if you would like.

OMG, I *love* this story... Looooooooooooooooooooooove it.

This is pretty good, nice quality, background and story, keep it up...