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by Nemain

person Sherman
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seeing as how you have been done with this story for a while and probably finished the forever-verse i guess it is kind of pointless to review and tell you how good it was, right? Otherwise you wouldn't have continued with it. So i guess i will review like every now and then, instead of every chapter. Hope you don't mind.

"We're so broke we can't pay attention" is funny because it's true. No but seriously, my English teacher used to say that all the time about his childhood.

This kind of sucks because when i lost my internet about 4 months ago, i couldn't read this story. I stopped at like chapter 20. So now there are some things that are happening that i forgot about. I don't really want to go back and read it all again so i am trying my best to read a confussing story. Hopefully i will start to remember somethings.

y ify if i havn't said anything likeat eat story, which it is, or glad you keep writing, which i am. I am more of an inside person. I keep my thoughts to myself when i read a story. So when it comes time to review a story or chapter, i just don't do it. I know the authors would like to hear their readers thoughts but i don't like to tell them. I guess it's kind of selfesh. Out of the hundreds of stories i have read, i have only reviewed like 20.

I don't know why i am telling you all this, you probably don't really care at all. This review was kind of pointless. I didn't really review your story. I just said stuff. So i am going to go no. bye.
person Id
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sorry to say but this one isnt as good as any of your others
person Vellaryn
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading Foreververse for weeks now. And after getting to this point, I feel inclined to say... dear lord, this story is long. But I like it all the more for its length. I'd do a little dance in the middle of my medical campus, naked in the winter, if it would keep this story going forever. Go smut! Yay! I hope to see more Bobby/John action later on. I'll find out, though, won't I? ^_^
I've said it before and I'll say it again, I *love* this story!
Also, I'm surprised to find that I get most of your references. You complained that some of those things made you feel old. Now I feel old too! ^_^;
person cerebra
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:)
person Nemain
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm not such a huge dork that I would actualevieeview my own story, but in response to a review, I have to clarify where I got my info on Tarot. http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Lair/5460/ Yes, she is considered a precog in the comics. Deal with it.
person Cin
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you just can't write fast enough to sate my mind. lol. i love your work. i've said it lots of times. this story is going so well. a bit low on the smutty but i know you're building it to that. it's the way you work. you give it everything... conflict, emotion, smut, personality, etc. you're just good!! please update it soon.
person Ramsey
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh, chuck! Nemains got a boy friend! nyah nyah nyah nyah!
*ahem*
NEwayZ, you know i love ya and everything that you do!
if you ever stop its hunting you down and the Ramsey feather torture for you!
person Skimaniac30
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of your stories but this one
I am in the process of reading this
please right more this is perfect
person Chuck
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are truly some kind of beuatful goddess the way you keep turning out these great stories. I dont get online but like once a week or so but when i do one of the thingsi do is spend like and 3 or four hours reading your stories(computers broke need to get it fixed). But I love ya and keep up the great work.
person nathan
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
is this part of the forever-verse? i think your a great writer write more plaesz