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Ummm, the first chapter seems to cut off at the Jubilee part. Where'd it go?

Hey I love this story it is crazy fun. I like how he got the four of the greatest of woman all over him. I hope you keep up the great writings and update soon..... I hope you get time to finish this story it is to great to stop reading.....

It has been a long time since I read this story. For some reason, I had to search this story out and reread it.

When I do, I find seven new chapters of multiple fun! I've added the story to my recs and I hope to see more updates. ;)

Yeah that rewrite of that chapter was much better and made more sense. Plus it wasn't too short like the original. I didn't know Jean was dating Scott in this. Now I feel bad for Scott and hate Jean, I mean the love of his life goes off and fucks someone else? I just hope that by the end of this you make it up to that character. Kind of sucks for him. Maybe in that spin offs the girls with their new sexual exploration decied to use more then just Jamie.

Maybe in a way to make up for her cheating Jean desides to make their relationship more 'open' and gives Scott the chance to 'even the odds' as it were. Plus of course maybe Kurt getting some action later on too.

Chapter 9 Review... in defense of the author, this is a SIDE FLING from the main Foreververse and something that I personally have been bugging her to continue. She has not had much in the way of feedback from her other readers to indicate that this story should be of high priority. This when combined with the fact that this a completely voluntary and not in any way profitable venture for her, I think that you should be grateful that she deigns to write at all, especially when all she gets in return are the rantings of unappreciative readers. So instead of whining and complaining try to make some constructive criticism and some notion of thanks for the hard work and dedication of an amazing author who produces excellent stories and asks for nothing in return!!!

Okay that chatper 9 was NOT worth the wait at all. I was hoping for more but it sounds like you're ending this, well this sucks. I wait for months for you to update this fic and that's all we get? This has been just so very disapointing and since when has Jamie did a 180 personality like that it makes no sence. You wrote him totally OOC from how he was at the start this is like reading him from another fic entirely.

I honestly hope you make the next chapter a hell of al ot better then this one, it was a total waste of my time. Yeah I know that's harsh but given how long I waited for the next chapter and what you did can you blame me for being pissed?

Chapter 9

Okay...I think you need more time to work on this one. The chapters are just getting shorter and shorter and longer waits between updates. Personally I don't get why Jamie went there when he didn't seen to have a problem at first. I guess Mystique was there but why she would tell him that I have no idea. I would have thought that she would have encouraged him. That just makes no sense to me at this point and what you're trying to do.

Plus it was kind of a boring chapter. Please tell me that the next chapters will pick up after this, this is one of my favs and I hate to see it start to go downhill.

Woot!

Nice fic, but that last chapter was way too short. I want to see what they do? Will they bring in Scott and Kurt into theit little fun to get them off their case? I hope so that will be a fun read. Also if you can check out my own stuff and tell me what you think.

please tell me you haven't gotten writers block ...it is just getting interesting!!!!