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for The Wonders Of Whipped Cream

by jadedangel

person dawn
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue and i asy caramel 'cause then rougue can he up the caramel making it nice and hot (not burning but hot enough for a tingle of pain) so when she 'drizzles' it on pietro she can enjoy his torture!!! heh heh heh (espically if he can do anything about it 'cause he tied down maybe) damn my imagination got the jump on me again! ^_^ anyhoo thnx for writing one on pietro!!!! he's sssoooooo smexy!!!!!!! ~_^
person DemonBlaze
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it
person Keiko Yuki
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CARAMEL!!!!!!! Definitely caramel. I won't go into detail in the review but ill most likely email u bout it. I loved it though (clever title if i might add.) I definitely think caramel should be next and i'm all for the four-part series idea.
person Suzaku24
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this stroy. You have got to get the next part in really soon if you can and if you have the time of day in this world.
person Yami-san
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oi, good! Do you do requests? If you do, can you do a Pietro/Kitty fic? The idea's been in my head for months, and I hope you can. Oh, if you do, make Kitty willing! Other than that, very good! Me like lots......lots and lots........like I like ice cream. Don't give me lots.....it makes me hyper.......I'll shut up now........
person Pyro\'s Rogue
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think the next one should be Caramel....Loved the fic!! Hurry and write the sequel!!
person AB
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Intersting use of whip cream, but I didn't like this story very much. Nonetheless, you did an okay job.
person Hatchan
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For a story focusing entirely on smut, the sex scene was too short. Though I suppose it's a good thing Pietro's a one-te mte man, because if he stayed in contact with Rogue for any longer, HE SHOULD BE DEAD. I reread your story and notes a few times, trying to find an explanation for why he isn't dead, and couldn't find one.

And a side note about the Wing/Moon stories - fics really shouldn't be that interchangeable. Fanfic should have proper characterization, and if you're just changing names left and write to fit your mood, then it won't result in very good fanfi
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person Lady Trunks
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Caramel. ^^ You are just becoming a regular little Rietro addict, aren't you. And that is such a good thing. ^^ I think I've found a total of 3 Rietro-based lemons, now finally weallyally have another one. ^_^ Yay! My suggestion/demand/order/plea, write more. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.^_^
person Kelly
schedule April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awsome sweet love it mroeplease soon
i thnink carmal