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for Fire on Ice

by Falerina

person Mandy
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaawww thats harsh, i cant believe you ended the chapter like that. great story so far. update soon.
person shad0wee
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good going so far... Hurry along the next part!! lol
I personally see Emma/Jean as more of a sexual fight for power over the other, less of a seduction, but hey you did good so far, so let's see what more you got! :-)