rate_review Reviews

i liked the writing and the pairing ,your story was good but it was hard to read because of one thing.i'm new at reading these and i know from my own writing how fast the words can flow so -please please please all you great writers out there - please proof read and spellcheck.

Ch.5 nearly killed me. OHGODISTHISHOT. *drools*

But I wanna learn more about this little "problem" of Kurt's. :) More? *holds out plushie as offering*

Greetings and salutations!

A very, very interesting piece of work you have here. I felt that words could not accurately describe it, and tried to make up my own words, but the spellcheck got mad at me so I'm reduced to mere English. Damn you, Clippitt!
Anyhow. First up, the use of dry (and wet) humour is marvellous, particularly the discussion of costumes. Always did wonder who the hell made those things... now we know. Fear it, indeed.
Characterisatis ofs off the charts. Excellent. Even Kurt, being somewhat changed for this story, is extremely appealing, really enhancing the 'rogue' side to his nature. Logan is great, Kitty is great, Bobby is fantastic, and Warren is mag-ni-fi-cent.riouriously, these sides to the characters are *not* explored often enough. Even the idea of Professor Xavier eating McDonalds is something that seems strange outside of this story, but fits so well here.
The Plot itself is going excellently. This curse, spell, whatever it is... I take it (maybe I'm just thick and missing the point) that it's supposed to make Kurt have sex with pretty much everyone and therefore burn them out, like he did to Warren and Betsy? Like magically turning him into a sexual weapon?meanmean, I've heard Kurt described as such before, but this is so intriguing the way you handle it.
As for the rest... well, 'tis yet a new story. But I look forward anxiously to the next installment, and the eventual explanation of the Tarot cards, Kurt's curse, ahethhether the loveseat is a subsidary nation of Warrentopia.
Good luck!

Tergon
& Selexor the Sng Png Platypus

Aaah! What's wrong with Fuzzy? Is he going to be ok? That was very kind of Logan to help him out there. And of you to describe it so nicely. I'm so glad you finally posted another chapter- I was wed ted that your story had gotten sick and died like mine did. I'm so glad it's ok! And what's with the Fuzzy Mono? Want to know....want to read more....


parking self on couch at Warrentopia until next chapter comes up
cheers-
Sadie

You must continue...Now! *Cracks whip in a slightly threatening, yet not un-sexy way* Vee haf vays off making you write!

Holy shit. Speechless with awe, desperately smoking a cigarette and gazing at my little Nightcrawler figure. If only there were illustrations to go along with this. Never mind I'd probably go blind. Tried to review the last chap but it got sucked into some interdimensional void. You continue to rule. I am going to mentally pass out on the couch of Warrentopia. Until Kurt comes home.

bowing in adoration-
Sadie

Need more. It's been days....I'm ... not feeling well. ALso trying to quit smoking which when combined with your lack of DESPERATELY NEEDED UPDATES is on par with cruel and unusual punishment. Please. help a girl out. Give me more slut puppy and perfect wit. I need it as do many many others. My pockets are overrun with dollar bills and tootsie pops......I beg of you..... I need to go back to Warrentopia. What do you say?

Please, Please, PLEASE tell me that Warrentopia will make an appearance in this series!! Lovers of Slacker Warren Unite!! I absolutely love your take on everyone - it's exactly what they all needed, a little lightening up. And Kurt the man-whore? Perfect!!

Oh Jaysus! Thank god you're back. And it's still brilliantly funny. The old uniform part had me in tears= especially since I have all the collected volumes of Uncanny and can clearly visualize said monstrosities. Xavier summed it up perfectly. Again you continue to astound me. I can't wait to read more. Especially with my slut puppy Kurt at the helm. Grr. Too many cool pop references to get giddy about. You rock in a way few few people know how to do. I'm not one of them but I read about it once. Keep up the great work and send me more slut puppy!

OMG.
You are officially killing me.
The whole costume scene was too much.

And here I thought that nothing was worse than the Man Panty®.