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for Number 112: A Pregnant Pause

by Karen

schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Who then? 'Ro? Nice rack, sure, but the 'I'm a goddess' routine is a major turn off and she wonders why her love life sucks. Jean? Too goddamn frosty, my dick's gone numb just mentioning her name. Kitty? She's nursing the mother of all crushes on Scott, which speaks volumes about her taste. Jubilee? I wouldn't fuck her with Scooter's dick - not even if I could gag her first."

This made me laugh soooo hard!!! You did a great job!!!
person Ellie
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Badabababa...I'm lovin' it! =D
person Morgan
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aahahaha. that's cute.
person Abril
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That, was some hot fic. Totally Logan and Rogue, he is adorable to her. Got to love him.
person JayJay015
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! Why can't all men be that sweet and wonderful? She's one damn lucky girl that Marie!

Another awesome job. I particularly liked the part when she thought he was gonna take the camera from her and surprised her with something else instead! ;) Isn't that a surprise we'd all like to have!