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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, but there seems to be something wrong with chapter 17. It stops in the middle of a sentence, and I'm really anxious to find out what happens next!
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omgosh this is an uber great story!!! plz plz plz finish it!!!!!!!!!
lol im so exited i dunno what to say... but i do have one suggestion to make: in the chapter 'the sounds of silence' it says: "outside, giles was chuckling silently. he had seen and heard..." and i just wanted to say that he couldnt have heard anything cuz no one could talk...
dont take this as criticism either, just a small detail you missed while writing this UBERLY UBER story!!
lol im so exited i dunno what to say... but i do have one suggestion to make: in the chapter 'the sounds of silence' it says: "outside, giles was chuckling silently. he had seen and heard..." and i just wanted to say that he couldnt have heard anything cuz no one could talk...
dont take this as criticism either, just a small detail you missed while writing this UBERLY UBER story!!
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April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI I hope whatever the problem with the family that you keep writing. You had me hooked the past few days reading when ever i got a chance.
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March 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love your story i hope you go places with it.