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Wow! I remember reading this back when I was sixteen- to be honest, I had forgotten all about it. I really felt like reading some Pyro/Iceman stories so I went scouring the archives and found yours little story. half-way through the first chapter i realized i'd read it before, and I got all excited and kept reading- and I loved it just as much as i had the first time. -Imagine my surprise when I got to the end, and realized that a fic i'd thought abandoned had two or three new chapters added on! While short, they were no less engaging. I hope you intend to continue this, finding it again has been such a thrill!

Oh, and before I go: I love the title. :P

*giggles evilly* I really like the set up for this whole story. The different views are very interesting and I'd love to see where you go with this!

AWESOME. That's the only thing I can say.

Woo, this is quite nice. No comments about the yuri part (though I agree Mystique is pretty sexy :p), but JohnBobby rocks! I actually love the first chap a lot. It's more... introspective? Don't know what word I should use. XD But anyway, so far so good.

Damn, what a wonderful situation! sexual tension all around, and well written too! Nice characterization, though this is definately a side of John I never imagined.

This is great! Any plans of continuing it? I love the varying viewpoints, and the delicious characterizations of Bobby and John. I adored the 'kiss it better' exchange. :) Great work.

*claps* bravo! Loved it, are you considering continueing this master piece?

I love John in this! Keep up the awesome work darlin :D

update soon this is a very good stotie

Wow, wonderfulness. I hope to see more.