rate_review Reviews

I'm really glad you're giving Tabs the attention she deserves. I love Tabs. I go overboard on the angst sometimes when I write her (I know it, I need to stop. Instead of her getting her life in order I usually watch her spiral out of control). Scot isn't my favorite, but I could see the pairing. Unconsciously drawn to a bit of stability, even though she wouldn't want to admit it. The last chapter wasn't my favorite so far. It had the same feel mine do when left to sit for a long time and come back to. Heh. A little disconnected from the rest of the story. I'm not sure I really see her trying to change for a guy either. Saying things to get his attention sure, but when she actually starts feeling that way....of course people do tend to start believing what they say after awhile so...

Anyway, I eagerly await more if more is to come. I appreciate that you've tried to keep everyone in character. I don't like Jean at all, but she's not a raging bitch, and you're right she really does try to be just that good. I tend to find her a little flat as a character is all, but that's just my particular taste. It drives me nuts when writers don't like a character and make them mockeries of themselves. (I have a friend who I just love dearly, but the way she writes Storm is just abhorant. All cruel and evil. I mean, I hate that she electrocuted Toad too (and it was totally out of character for all the other continuums) but that doesn't mean she'd stand around laughing while someone she's not crazy about gets tortured. Heh. Anywho, I digress...I just intended to tell you I enjoyed your characterizations of everyone. :-)

Take care and write more! :-)

Dude this story rocks!

Just out of curiousity, when's the next installment? I'm going loco here waiting for the next chapter!

Great story, love the pairing. Gotta be the only one of its kind. In need of more chapters though.



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Please continue... I like this one. Scott is so seldom done well, and the same goes for Tabby. I've been hoping you'd keep going with it...

I'm glad someone finally makes Tabitha look good. In the comics Boom Boom/Meltdown is an awesome character who is very funny but can also be a bitch when the need arises. Thank you for being one of the few people out there who actually writes Tabby like she is in the comics, just plain cool.

its good its actually good, I loved this story specially loved the way you wrote Scott little heroic leaps at being well human and not a by the book person. I love Taby as well adored her actully sow you better get to work on the next chapter oh and a side note I do hate Jean .

hey, this is really great. Please hurry and update. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Wow. I love this. I do. Sorry I didnt find it before.

how cute...but scott n tabby...they're like total opposites...but then again...opposites attract right...anyway all da best...keep up the good work...hope u'll update it soon...