rate_review Reviews

This is an exllent story, it is a shame you you have not writen more of it. You have done a wonderful job of catching the attiudes of the x-men, but I think Storm with her own back ground of mystism would not have been so suprised by Jen's abilities, but that is my own thought. The story and writing are outstanding in any case.

I would love to see how this ends. I like how you brought wica into the mutant world. Please keep it up.

This was truly a great read, very well written and thought out. Wonderful job, Thank you for the great read.

Take Care,

Di Frosty

OOOOOH!!!!! Someone who knows about Paganism and magick. You write it very well, and it's very interesting. I'm anxious to see what happens and how the team eventually chooses to accept or reject Jen. Not that it isn't totally in character, but why is Scott always the tight-assed prick? What does Jean see in him anyhow? And Ororo was worshipped as a Goddess, so she should be twigging just a bit to what is going on with Jen. This is very interesting and I definitely want to read more. Please continue.

I like this! Please say there's gonna be more...
For once, the 'hero' isn't perfect - she's actually a normal human being - not one of the 'spandex brigade'.
Thanks for making her believable.

I like what you've got so far, certainly. Usually OC insertion fics are more of an irritation than good reading, but this was certainly the exception to the rule. I look forward to reading more as it comes along.