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for Longing Dreams

by Wren

person Jags
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was HOT
person tierrafox
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM

This one is not bad. Please fix the type-os, spelling errors, and mis-use of words/grammar!!

These errors distracts the reader from the enjoyment of the story!!
person Lilliseth
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! *fans self* That was HOT! I loved it so much.
person PrincessLemon
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOAH! Thaas Ras REALLY good. everyone got some and it was very well written. i like lemons like this. you're very good and i can't w8 2c what you write next.
person xmen_freak119
schedule March 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* god! please add more? *pants and shivers* i loved it! oh goddess i loved it!