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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit dude thsi is an awsome story line!!! Can't wait to see what you coem up wiht next. Maybe some of the more well known woman from the Marvel verse. Been nice to see fi you can figure someitng out for Rouge, Maybe have Unus the untouchable wiht hsi forcefeidls rape rouge (hint hint)
keep it up and let me know when you add a new chapter
keep it up and let me know when you add a new chapter
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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, update soon. I'm hoked but you've left me dangling. I look forward to seeing more work on your fascinating story!! I love it so far.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm well here is a suggestion. M gives in and miss lock "hires" her but the interview involves Miss locke enjoying M and then giving M her assignment
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I really, really, really want to see some more and the sooner the better!!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am such a sick creature for enjoying this... but I did. Am curious as to how you drew lots or whatever to choose the girls you did. Wasp, Rogue, Shadowcat, She-Hulk, Black Cat, Scarlet Witch, Storm, and so many others... proably would not have worked out, overall. But there are bound to be a few more here and there that would be `contenders` for all this evil.
And yes, there should be more f/f stuff like Amara/Rahne. As another asked, where are all the evil Bitches? I mean its got to be more than whatever Miss Locke has in mind for M, but it'd be nice to see her more at play.
And here is something else, what about all these bad guys, major and minor, AND all these henchmen. All who are concerned believe the X-kids dead, but Citizen V, Jolt, and Songbird were snatched from the field of combat. Teammates are worried. As for the others they have people missing them, too. Cloak and Dagger were/are loners, but just one friend need realise they're gone, and said friend would make the rounds asking questions. Of both good guys and bad. They'd notice certain bad guys (B-g) who would be around plotting.... aren't. Of course it'd be just the B-g they know. But when they also talk to fellow G-g's somebody is going to go "You're missing so and so???", and figure out something evil is brewing. If nothing else, if everybody pools together a list of baddies who are now very under the radar, G-gs will find what B-gs they can and start to get very nosy. There are some, like the Punisher or maybe Moondragon or Sersi, that have a looser grasp or Whatever, and answers will be reached. Then watch out, because someone is going to get BEAT TO HELL!
Well. Dagger, Jolt, Namorita, Songbird, and Tigra. And plenty of room for weird sex. Others have mentioned machines and some famous baddies. How about either a Circus troupe or a handful of dogs from a kennel for...Jolt? Come on lets mix and match. Yeah, I know, everyone was thinking Tigra, right? A Cadre of Atumas' best for Namorita for sure, but there are some Other sea-creatures that could be a real Handful??? Octopus anyone?
And yes, there should be more f/f stuff like Amara/Rahne. As another asked, where are all the evil Bitches? I mean its got to be more than whatever Miss Locke has in mind for M, but it'd be nice to see her more at play.
And here is something else, what about all these bad guys, major and minor, AND all these henchmen. All who are concerned believe the X-kids dead, but Citizen V, Jolt, and Songbird were snatched from the field of combat. Teammates are worried. As for the others they have people missing them, too. Cloak and Dagger were/are loners, but just one friend need realise they're gone, and said friend would make the rounds asking questions. Of both good guys and bad. They'd notice certain bad guys (B-g) who would be around plotting.... aren't. Of course it'd be just the B-g they know. But when they also talk to fellow G-g's somebody is going to go "You're missing so and so???", and figure out something evil is brewing. If nothing else, if everybody pools together a list of baddies who are now very under the radar, G-gs will find what B-gs they can and start to get very nosy. There are some, like the Punisher or maybe Moondragon or Sersi, that have a looser grasp or Whatever, and answers will be reached. Then watch out, because someone is going to get BEAT TO HELL!
Well. Dagger, Jolt, Namorita, Songbird, and Tigra. And plenty of room for weird sex. Others have mentioned machines and some famous baddies. How about either a Circus troupe or a handful of dogs from a kennel for...Jolt? Come on lets mix and match. Yeah, I know, everyone was thinking Tigra, right? A Cadre of Atumas' best for Namorita for sure, but there are some Other sea-creatures that could be a real Handful??? Octopus anyone?
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Maybe you can introduce some more x-men into it. I'd love to see Rogue and Gambit captured. Can I see possibilities there! Anyway, keep up the good work!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where is the next chapter?? please don't make 'hero' win...
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story although I, agree with whoever said that Belasco or Blackheart would, have been better choices instead of some made up generic demon. Or you could have used both for the first two and finished off with Appocalypse.As for suggestions.
Why not have Braon Zemo torture Jolt. As punishment for her part inturning the Thunderbotls, against him, and Tygra as well
because the Avengers helped beat him when he he had them mindcontrolled with the Fantastic Four. Then have Juggernaut
take Songbird.
Why not have Braon Zemo torture Jolt. As punishment for her part inturning the Thunderbotls, against him, and Tygra as well
because the Avengers helped beat him when he he had them mindcontrolled with the Fantastic Four. Then have Juggernaut
take Songbird.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well you have'nt really done anything with tigra or namorita. you know you could start out with omega red sexualy tourturing them with his tendrels and then have him hand them over to sabertooth, wild child and dark beast or somthing like that, it could be cool, just a suggestion. love the story by the way keep up the good work!
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can not wait another stories.. hope there will no happy handing for the 'super hero'