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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't wait to see what happens next.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
Well that was certainly interesting, instead of jumping into when it starts we jump into the middle of her ordeal. It makes for a nice change of pace and the little treatment she gets after each rape is certainly nothing I've ever seen before I have to admit that's a good idea to help mentally break down someone.
I see the Wrecking crew had some fun with her, will we see more of those guys again? Since I'm sure there are a few they have personal scores with with some of the captives. Although I see that she's not totally broken or defeated just yet but is getting there. You know for ideas look up Sexy Magical Girl, there are things that women like M could survive that normal females wouldn't.
Well that was certainly interesting, instead of jumping into when it starts we jump into the middle of her ordeal. It makes for a nice change of pace and the little treatment she gets after each rape is certainly nothing I've ever seen before I have to admit that's a good idea to help mentally break down someone.
I see the Wrecking crew had some fun with her, will we see more of those guys again? Since I'm sure there are a few they have personal scores with with some of the captives. Although I see that she's not totally broken or defeated just yet but is getting there. You know for ideas look up Sexy Magical Girl, there are things that women like M could survive that normal females wouldn't.
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So whose next after Jolt and Songbird? How about Tigra and Namorita? Haven't had them for a bit and I really would like to see those two. I can see having Tigra have that device turned on and forced into begging to do all kinds of degrating things to get off. Fucking men, women, anything but the device keeps activating and she can't stop, not even until her cunt is sore and she only feels pain from fucking she has to keep at it until Arcade turns it off as she's starting to bleed, he dosen't want her to die from blood loss so he lets her rest until next time. And you can have her even on sex machines and hell if you're into that thing forcing her to fuck animals, given she's half cat.
For Namorita you can had a few sea monsters or even that guy that keeps trying to take over Antlantis, and Killershark as well. Maybe some mutant squid or someone putting an electic eel into her as part of it. Hey you wanted suggestions and these are the darkest ones I could think of without going into snuff stuff which I don't like.
For Namorita you can had a few sea monsters or even that guy that keeps trying to take over Antlantis, and Killershark as well. Maybe some mutant squid or someone putting an electic eel into her as part of it. Hey you wanted suggestions and these are the darkest ones I could think of without going into snuff stuff which I don't like.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, R & R'd last week or so, and had this thought breeze through the other day...
Tigra is a feline. So, dislikes the water and likes Fish. So just how unhappy is she going to be being the filling in a fish sandwich!!! Ha, I kill me.
Everything from a Starfish to, oh maybe some leeches and some Eels ( a certain type of Eel from somewhere deep, a kind that lives in and around active volcanic vents, so is rather thick and can generate its own heat, and has a secretion from its skin that once removed from that heat changes in composition to act like... itching powder. So, even after it slithers out from whereever it was in her, she is still in trouble. Just doesn't know it yet). Just what might come from the deep other than a handful of wrathful, horny Atlantians, I'm drawing a blank.
Tigra is a feline. So, dislikes the water and likes Fish. So just how unhappy is she going to be being the filling in a fish sandwich!!! Ha, I kill me.
Everything from a Starfish to, oh maybe some leeches and some Eels ( a certain type of Eel from somewhere deep, a kind that lives in and around active volcanic vents, so is rather thick and can generate its own heat, and has a secretion from its skin that once removed from that heat changes in composition to act like... itching powder. So, even after it slithers out from whereever it was in her, she is still in trouble. Just doesn't know it yet). Just what might come from the deep other than a handful of wrathful, horny Atlantians, I'm drawing a blank.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still worried as to what may happen to Namorita and Tigra. OUCH for Melissa and Hallie. Just, as before, wonder how some of the other Heroes are handling the loss of teammates?
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like a good wine it gets better as time goes on...hope to see some more soon.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
Ah well that was a nice little revenge for Zemo and I have to wonder what will happen next. How about in the next one those two are forced into a room with all those Masters of Evil they captured when Hawkeye led them? Plenty of those would want some type of revenge. And I think this gave me the perfect ending for Dallas, since she was Citizen V how about Zemo gets her but it dosen't end with just breaking her? I'm sure the Zemo would want to carry his bloodline and what better way then to rape and get pregnant the decendent of his father's enemies that he killed?
Kind of fitting and I'm sure thatZemo could make an offer to Archade to keep Dallas, maybe even offer up a trade for a new slave for his little park in the process?
Ah well that was a nice little revenge for Zemo and I have to wonder what will happen next. How about in the next one those two are forced into a room with all those Masters of Evil they captured when Hawkeye led them? Plenty of those would want some type of revenge. And I think this gave me the perfect ending for Dallas, since she was Citizen V how about Zemo gets her but it dosen't end with just breaking her? I'm sure the Zemo would want to carry his bloodline and what better way then to rape and get pregnant the decendent of his father's enemies that he killed?
Kind of fitting and I'm sure thatZemo could make an offer to Archade to keep Dallas, maybe even offer up a trade for a new slave for his little park in the process?
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5
Wow never thought to see you back I thought you gave up on writing a LONG time glad I was wrong and I really hope that this is a sign that you'll have more updates soon. As for the start of this I must admit that was a unique thing I never seen before. Although I now wonder what will happen to Songbird should be interesting to say the least.
Wow never thought to see you back I thought you gave up on writing a LONG time glad I was wrong and I really hope that this is a sign that you'll have more updates soon. As for the start of this I must admit that was a unique thing I never seen before. Although I now wonder what will happen to Songbird should be interesting to say the least.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really awsome i hoep you add a new chapter to it...maybe do someting about with Rouge and cancelling out her powers. keep up the good work