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Like it a lot. I keep coming back but it's not continued. Please continue soon.

Hot story!

great chapter

Forgot a few things in my last review, looking back I noticed that there is still Dagger left I had forgotten she was even in the story to be honest. I liked the part where you had Tigra thinking on how things would go if they got out and how everyone would react to what happened and her own plans on things. That I think was a nice touch to the story there. Although I think you forgot her injuries at one points as her entire front would he hurting yet she acted like her body hadn't been tortured all that time, just be mindfull of that stuff. Plus some of the things you put the other women through also wouldn't heal up over night too.

Also when did Arcade put in ninites into their blood? I thought it was just those strips put inside of them, since if Arcade did that then Monet wouldn't have been able to crush that guy's cock that was put inside of her. So that was a little odd and a bit confusing with previous chapters. I was also wondering if you made Tigra the spy because of her action during Civil War as Iron Man's spy against Captain America?

Well I got to admit with so long without an update I thought you weren't writing anymore, glad I was wrong. The Tigra chapter wasn't bad, although I would have liked more detail in a few bits like when she actually fucked the doctor and when the two guards were using her since the sexual parts weren't much in this. I think that's all of them done at least once now right? I remember you saying you'd go them all again so I have to wonder what will happen now, a few have broken or near broken by now so it will be interesting to see.

Tigra's next time would be interesting to see just how far she'll go, as she won't fight back now I wonder if Arcade will push her to see just how 'loyal' she is and if she'll go the distance.

In chapter two you said that they all talk about their experiences together so I guess after this they were put into the same cell.

Incredible story! Sick, twisted, and sexy. I especially enjoyed the stories of the New Mutant girls, and of Jolt and Songbird. Very good job of getting into the girl's heads and giving a feeling for what they are enduring. I'm looking forward to more from you, if not in this story, then in another. Please keep them coming.

Well done, I cannot wait for the hopeful revenge that the heroines will wreck upon Arcade and his ilk, but then again if that doesn't happen more the better.

And then...please continue soon. This is a great story so far.

Every time I read it, I love it more and more.

Good, very good! Keep writing.