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Great story. Are you going to continue? I hope to see more of this amazing story soon. Arcade is one sick bastard, I love it.

Good to see you back at it!

Don't really have that much to say except great story and keep up the good work. If I can make a request I would ask for more stomach expansion please. Again thank you for a great story.

I hoep you're still taking ideas, I just had one for Monet/Paige/Amara you can have all three of them having to entertain a group of FOH members. Also do Paige, Bonita and Maria still have milk filled breasts from when they gave birth in chapter 2? If so you can use that in the Monet/Paige/Amara idea mainly that one member is fucking Paige and squeezes her breasts hard enough for milk to leak out and they force Monet and Amara to suck it all out of each breasts while fucking them. Also since Paige can heal from mostly any damage by ripping off her skin she can take a lot more abuse and heal instantly. I've seen her gutted and then she was fine when the skin was ripped off.

So I can see the FOH members going to town on those two since they would want to hurt them as much as fuck them, for Monet they would get more creative given her invulnerability. Like using baseball bats as dildos or something, maybe tying a rope around her breasts and hanging her from them and all sorts of things.

I hope for the next chapter you focus on Tigra and Monet as I really want to see more of those two.

Didn't notice the update for the chapter 10 the part 2, although I am surprised by how short it was that is the shortest chapter you've ever done. I know fast updates are nice but I can wait a bit longer if it means you'll make longer chapters. This honestly I think can be pasted into the last chapter or maybe it should be put into the end of part 1 as it feels like it should have been a part of the previous chapter.

I was wondering about the Taskmaster when you mentioned him but I forgot to ask last time, I shouldn't be surprised he's using them to train his students. Although I bet the odds are stacked against the women I would think a part of them actually take a small amount of pleasure as this is the only time they can fight back and would fight a lot harder given all the things they've been through.

Although I am interested to see what the others are going through at the moment. Plus with all the men and women doing this there has to be a few that will be stupid enough to say something. I can just see some like the wrecking crew going drinking after and bragging. If so you could use this to bring in other new female characters to break, like they find the place but get captured. But that's just an idea. I can also see that any friendships with some would be very strained. As like we saw some would do anything to avoid punishment like in that one chapter when they had to fight and rape the other to win. I have to wonder if we'll see any rivalries or something in the next chapter to be shown.

Just found this story even though it appears to have been started years ago. I would rate this A+. Very cool idea. I had forgotten about Arcade but he is the perfect villian for this type of story. i am still reading the chapters but am very interested in where it goes.

My only criticism is that you don't seem to focus on the women's speech and quotes enough. Meaning, you will say that a certain characcter screams as she is whipped or fucked, but instead it would be better to actually type out what she says. Just a thought and obviously since I am reading chapters from several years ago, not much you can do now and maybe you have done more of this in newer chapters.

wow, I didn't expect that fast of an update, I think that's the fastest time you did that I didn't expect another one until months from now. So I see that you skipped ahead time wise and now we see them all broken. Even if they are rescued (which I have no idea if they ever will or not) they're hero days are over at this point. There would be no way for them to not run into villains that have already had them in Arcade's park. Plus I doubt they could even go out as heroes as they would be too afraid of something like this happening again.

But it's unique to see how the days go with them, and we see how Arcade keeps them in health was a good touch as most would forget about that kind of thing. The birth control would explain why now one (besides those three in chapter 2) have gotten pregnant yet, but that won't last forever and I bet its just another little game of Arcade to make them wonder when it will happen when it does. Not sure if you'll update as fast again but I do wonder how the others are coping with things as we've seen mostly from Maria's viewpoint and a bit of Dani's. Although would Tigra still be the 'spy' in the group after all this time or will we see her telling Arcade something like someone has a plan to get out at some point?

I have to admit I didn't expect that with Dagger, I think that was the most irony any of the women have gone through, I mean she protects that area and now you see how it effects to those that knew the people that were sent to jail because of her actions. SO after all this time you finally got through them all once, now I have to wonder how the next round will be, as many have already been broken but not all I would think. Although one thing, does Arcade have something to heal them after all that, because some of the stuff they have gone through would pretty much make them useless for awhile. Anyways I can't wait to see the next chapter now, will you go the same women in the same order or will you mix it up a bit now?

Still waiting with anticipation. You haven't used Dagger yet. I expect she'll be next. Please update soon.