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Very funny situation. Can't wait to find out what happens next. :)

You dont get THAT weak from Food Poisoning.. I know.. I had it bad once. But anyway.. you wouldnt and I dont think Kitty is that nieve. Plus.. Lance dosent wear shorts all that often. He hates them.

Its ok but... also.. bad in most parts.

That was awesome! Incredible imagriy! I was really suprised that you didn't have Petrio be in the middle. His character seems to fit the bich seat more than Kitty would. Kay just wanted to let you know it was great. Oh and if you could do a Kurt/Petrio I would love you. Your really good at at least getting the characters in a situation to have sex insead of just writing a story of just sex. I mean this is adult fan fiction not smut-r-us. (All be it that there is nothing wrong with smut. I like smut just as much as the next person.) Okay now I'm done. Hint-hint Knudge-Knudge KURTRIO! ((^^))

Pretty interesting fic, but you can work on your sentences cos they're a bit "mechanical". But besides, great idea, paragraphing, and spelling. Keep it up.

I loved it! Write more with these three.