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for The Apartment

by Jaenelle

person evilmouse
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Um...that's something else. You are a great writer and your knowledge and descriptions make me a little scared of you, but it was hot. Never thought about poor
Rouge not able to have sex :( Poor thing.
person Psychotikitten
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Either you did your homework or you're actually in the scene...and you sound like a damn good player to me :)
I wasn't too fond of the first two chapters, but that's because I'm a dominant female and not all that interested in boys topping girls.
The 3rd and 4th chapters, however, were FUCKING HOT. I loved the shrink wrap and sounds! I've done both to my submissive, but not both at once...it is certainly an interesting idea! Too bad he's a ponyboi and doesn't have any wings! :)
My favorite part of the 4th chapter was the last bit (poor Scott...you made him wait so long!) where Scott ends up fucking Jean in the ass to avoid the crop!

All in all, extremely creative and well-written! Luvvit.

- Dee
person abril
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the Romyness, give us more Romyness.
person draelynn
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Lord. You are an evil, evil woman. I especially enjoyed suched a sadistic Remy... any story where he gets to let loose on Rogue is an big ol' plus in my book. I adore seeing Warren on his knees begging like the dog he is. And Betsy makes such a natural dom. A little bit of wing torture takes this from the typical to the extraordinary. Who wouldn't like to torture Warren? But coming up with such a devious way to include his wings - bloody brilliant. Oh please, please, please, Mistress, please make Scott the next sub.
person db
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update. I love this story. I have read it so many times. I want more Jubilee and Logan and Jean and Scott. Please. I so love this story. It can't end. You are such a good writer. Thanks for writing.
person Roe
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It was very good. When I read the part of Jubilee remembering her rape however, it made me want to cry. I just felt really bad for her. Ya know? But still...really, really hot! Good job! I can't wait for Emma to get hers!
person Stormy Weather
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very nicely written. I can't wait to see who else stops by. Hmmm, Jean and Emma I think I like that idea. Ya know who else mightinteintertings.. Ororo (dom) and Kitty (sub).. Just a thought.. Looking forward to more.
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what Remy does to an invincible mutant to make her scream. ;-)
person Roe
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*drools and screams* Dear Lord in HEAVEN! I wish I could be there now. *whimpers* Awesome. Really. Best display of BDSM I've ever read in a looooong time. Brava! *claps and throws a rose*
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I know what will make an invincible mutscrescream, and frankly I can't blame her! Remy as a dom is very sexy, so much more so than when he's portrayed as a sub in some other stories. Jean punish Emma? I have a hard time seeing Emma as a sub, but hey this could be interesting. Ororo is definitely dom material. Great chapter!