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for Hell Hath No Fury

by Nemain

person rubberduck
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i gotta say this story of yours is moving a tad slowly. six chapters so far and nothing really has happened. sure, the chapters are quite short and they do move the plot along, it's just getting a bit frustrating at this snails pace. i do, however, like your characterizations. the x-men are all in character. i especially lkittkitty, but that goes without saying as she is such a cutie. kurt is obviously a mystery. we need to know what his connection to hellboy is soon. or at least throw in some more action. maybe some romance. i look forward to learning more.
person waqר q
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah an update! I'm really warming up to crossover stories and I really like this one. It connects very well and it only makes senese that Kurt maybe demonic not that his bad but he does have the same appitie as Hellboy. I hope you update soon. Till your next chapter. ((^^))
person rubberduck
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'trolls?' hehe. sounds promising. gotta love your sense of adventure. kitty is so sweet. i don't think kurt will be able to be mad at her for long. i wonder why he thinks he belongs with hellboy. i'm anxious to find out more.
person Shadrach
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great story from Nemain, really enjoying this so far; eagerly awaiting the next update. Keep up the excellent work.
person faleeple
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very intrigued. please wright more. thank you
person faleeple
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
spelling. ick. (mine, not yours, sorry)
person rubberduck
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another story? another story? how can i keep up? anyway, since it's sooo early in the story and i have no idea where you are going with this i can't really say anything. i like what you have written so far. it seems compelling and finally we have our first 'glimpse' at hellboy. i look forward to more.
person Margay
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting premise! Nice writing too. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
person alyson
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heya! please, please, please continue! i'm loving it already! it's fo hard to find good, well written xmen evolution fics, and thisone seems to be the cream of the crop! keep up ght egood work, and upate soon! please?
person Macelf
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, I never even thought about a Hellboy X-over....It's so perfect, too. Please continue, I can't wait to read more!