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I need more story. Please? I beg of you.

Hell.o 8o)

this has been a hell of a good story so far!
eventhought I don't actually get the "somestate = hell" jokes I love them 8o)
btw, in the 13th chapter (iirc) it talks about a city called "Sao Paolo" if you meant the brasilian city(in the state of the same name) the correct spelling would be "São Paulo", but I guess there gotta be quite a few cities named "Sao Paolo" around the world, or perhaps "San Paolo" or "San Pablo" etc, it is all diferent translations of names and words reffering to Saint Paul


btw the story by itself is so good I don't even miss the hardcore sex stuff, but of course if some nice smut is added without damaging the story it would be more than welcome 8o)

ps: can I get into a mailist or something alike to know whem more chapters arive?

oh, and I forgot to say, I loved the interaction between Hellboy and Wolverine, Priceless 8o)

Oh that was so cool and so gross. I would think you saw Constintene to have made that scene of hell but the chap was out too early. Good show. Hope another chap is on the way soon. Till next time. ((^^))

even though i usually like your stories, i'm getting a bit frustrated with this one. it just seems like it's going nowhere. kurt keeps pushing everyone away and no one but kitty is trying to help. he needs to open up and actually let some interaction take place. at least get to the action, because, i'm sorry, but i'm getting bored.

kurt's a tad stubborn isn't he? that's quite the statement though: he's going to hell, indeed. lol i have to say, some of your lines are so witty. i especially liked the line from liz "do you people always overreact like this?" and of course rogue's reply, "only on our good days." priceless stuff. hehe i don't know how you write such short chapters that seem to contain so much. must be a skill. keep up the good work.

Yeah an update! And a surpise ending. I will wait patiently for the next chapter but don't make us wait too long.

*Poke* Erm...update? Please?

*Looks fascinated by the ground by her shoes*

Er...please?

POKE! POKE! You're killing us you know that don't you. That's okay we'll survive. Till your next chapter. ((^^))

Gosh I really like this story and I wait patiently for it to update all the time. Your killing me! But the old saying goes 'Good things come to those that wait'. I guess I'm just impateicent. Till your next upate. ((^^))