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for Melt

by frkwerewolf

person Aresy
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww this was cute n hot. lol. ^^ Please continue! I would love to see more of the story develope around them.
person isaac
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loooooved this part!
"Ice crystals formed on the windows as Bobby moaned and pushed back with each thrust"

whooo, hot
person Sekre
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Very Kawaii. I hope this isnt a one shot.
person kwlguy
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it keep up the good work man
person Yukio
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... They're so damn cute together!!! Pyro/Iceman pairings are the best!!! -Was this a oneshot? Or can I expect more!?^-^
person rave
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i know what im dreamin about tonight *drools*
person jaygoose
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW....That was extremely fluffy but good fluff. I love Pyro/Iceman get togethers. Thanks for the inspiration. I really needed it.
person Sebastion
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i thought this was a great story, well descriptive, and very enjoyable to read. Write more, i am waiting for the next chapter, email me if you would like, i have a few published storys on here about boy lust, and i think you would enjoy them. oh please write another chapter, i want to see more of this