rate_review Reviews

GRANT STORY THE ENDING WAS JUST GRANT

Heh. The ending was funny. I thought it was interesting how you made it all to be just a simulation of their worst fears and it all ended up happening. It was totally awesome. You rock chika! Keep writing!

this story is awesome..i havent read it all but i like what i have read so far...keep it up.

Well Roe, Jean and Scott aren't hallucinating, Veiyn is real. Yes it was Charles giving Jean the lesson for hurting his 'son' and he or someone else may teach her another lesson. That's a nice little twist that you suggested about Jean and Charles fucking with Scott's fragile little mind, but Veiyn's power is fire and like Phoenix, she can reincarnate herself, so to help along, Mags did kill her but she came back as soon as they boarded her body on the plane and she just decided to fuck with J & S to see if Scott would go far with Veiyn and to see if Charles would let his secret out that he can walk and would do anything for the happiness of his students.

** Is there anyone you or anyone you would like to see in this little mind game I got going?

Strange...very, very strang. I absolutely love it. But it confuses me. Is he simply halucinating...or is it really her ghost come back to haunt them both? Or could it be Jean or Charles that's putting the strange idea of her being alive in the both of their heads?

Hmm...I read it again. Still don't know who it is, but it almost sounds like Logan or sumthin'. Not sure. My poor brain's dumb from bein' sick. *pouts* I'll be good girl and wait patiently though. *sits and waits, but still looks eager* Sucks about you working all week though. Eh. Gotta get money somehow though right? *grins*
Anyway...*grumbles* forever obediant. *kneels and waits*

Roe don't dare bow to me only men should bow. Today is the 2nd and I took off so I think I'll write ch 7 to appease the loyal subject.

I thought the man giving Jean a lesson was obvious, oh well you should have fun guessing who it is. Of course it was Vanquish and she will be having a hell of a lot of fun torturing the 'perfect' couple and I think I will bring my baby back into the mix, Magneto to give Vanquish, maybe Jean and someone very special to him a lesson. So Roe hold on, 'cause you have to wait because I have to work the entire weekend, but I guess it's a good thing because I think of more stuff to do to Miss Grey and Mr. Summers. SO be patient and I always appreciate input and ideas.

Sweet! Yes! Definatly loving it! Gotta do more. Please? I knew it had to be her! But who was it that raped Jean? I realllly need to know. Was it just her imagination? Or was it real?

Hey! I love this! It's awesome! Please tell me that Mags and Vanquish didnt' really die? Please? Please? Write more and prove me right? *begs, pleads and sobs*