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by wynterhawk

person Malinen
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Good! XD
I love Remy!!! <3
person PieJunkie
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Gambit/Pyro.
person Spazzi
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mraw, foo. Pyro -should- have gone XS.
person Chen Li
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, but for Chapter 3, it would be better if you didn't mention who turned Gambit into this. It keeps the readers coming back for more if you don't reveal why Gambit had a headache or suttin.
But still, it's a nice fic.