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by Wolvertique

person lolita
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahahaha! **My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard and they're like - it's better than yours, damn right it's better than yours!** Such a suitable song. :)

What a fantastic chapter - poor Remy i do feel so sorry for him NOT! but then I also think that Rogue is gonna pay for that. And I can't wait to find out how!
person lolita
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew this was HOT! Poor Scott though being chosen randomly! that did make me chuckle, poor guy can never catch a break - oh wait yes he can, I think Jean saw to that. Girl power in this chapter, woohoo! lol.
person lolita
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahaha, omg, this was so funny - Remy's little stunt with the camera was just so perfect for breaking the sexual tension. I just have this hilarious mental image now. *still chuckling*
Loved Rogue's stretching too, when the bets over -now that will be an interesting chapter- or rather chapters lol.
person lolita
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How the heck can one story be so hot and sexy and yet so damn funny at the same time? I keep saying it but it's still true - I love this story, Storm so calmly saying morning to both Rogue and Remy, that just got me, cla.
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Yet sexy as hell too the photo's hmm Remy naked. yes I could see why she'd let that slide. :)
person lolita
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew - you are totally evil, I so thought that this chapter was gonna go in another direction, but you kept Remy noble- if not a little w! LM! LMAO.

And who pray tell does Emma want?

Please continue soon - I promise to read and review - I'm good like that. :)

One piece of advice - make it longer, so I can enjoy more! *Shaking fist menacingly* lol.
person Dervish
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You'd better be planning to let us know what EXACTLY was on that paper! ;-D I doubt many of us can stand the torture!
person Silmaril
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is beyond superb. I'm particularly amazed at your ability to keep all of the players in character, especially now that you're adding more and more of them! Thanks for throwing in Emma (she's a particular favorite). For the sake of all Romy fans out there, please continue!
person Jade
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well ya got me interested in how it all turns out.
person Vix
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I got my wish! :)

This chapter is too funny!
person Leishy
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. And I see you've changed the pairings. *hands you a cookie* thank you. :)