rate_review Reviews

Two more wonderful chapters. You're doing a wonderful job with the psychological angle, it's truly gutwrenchingly painful to watch them deal with this.... Only suggestion is a bit more proof-reading - there's a few spelling/grammar errors and the occasional word-choice issue.

Really good so far. Please continue.

Ouch! Poor Elf.... You've really done an amazing job here of capturing Kurt and Logan's emotions here. Wonder how long it'll take Logan to realize it's him now, not the drug still being in his system - at least I'm assuming that's the case. You have no idea how thrilled I am at your projection of 50 chapters - and most of them already written. A continuous supply of good fic (at least for a while) is a wonderful thing!

50+ chapters! Now that's what I like to hear! Thought I'd give you a bit more encouragement cause I'm enjoying this fic so much :D So far, all the reactions of the characters have been spot on - I really like the attention to detail you've given to handling their emotions. Kurt sinking into shock as the adrenaline wears off, Logan coming to grips with what he's done and how he now feels about Kurt. Like I said, very, very nice and subtle. Keep it up!

Oooh! Elf-torture is good, especially when it's well-written! Very, very nice. I see a few small spelling and grammar problems, but nothing serious, and nothing you couldn't fix with a quick scan. Higher quality than much of what you see on this site. Please tell me there's more to the story. They do get to have some kind of revenge against Trask, right? I do hwe'we'll hear from you again!

Wow! I have ALWAYS been a Kurt/Logan fan, and having torture in here as well is everything I've been waiting for in an Evo fic... ^_^ I love how you kept them both in character, especially Kurt. That's hard to find in most fanfic, now.

I will, most definitely, be watching this one. You're doing a great job!