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for In Fear of Three Little Words

by Julia

person Tana
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the two-chapter fix! Hee hee. At least Logan didn't put up too much of a fight with Cassie. I hope everything goes as well when they bring Kurt into the sessions. Can't wait for more, and good luck with your new story whenever that starts. As for your muse, try tying it to your computer chair and feeding it some sugar-infested candy. Works for mine when he doesn't sit still. ^_^
person Dark
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 56 was kinda hot. I just thought you should know that. And what's this I hear about another story? You've got my attention. Anything to do with torturing Kurt? Is it a bad sign that I want the answer to be yes?
person WARCONQ
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yippy Skippy! Another wounderful chapter. You are pumping out out like a machine. I really your repisintaion of Logan. You didn't miss a beat with that type of character. I do hope that Sabertooth comes back so Kurt can conqure his fear and abuse and so Saber tooth can get a real ass whooping. Hehehehe. Keep up the update but don't write yourself to death. I really like your stuff and your ideas as wel you your writeing flow so I'm expecting more from you mister. Got me! Kay, Till your next arouseing chapter. ((^^))
person Tana
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me again. Thought I'd drop by and say hi and that I like Cassie, the therapist. She's not the stereotypical therapist, ya know? She kindmindminds me of mine... don't get any wrong ideas. ^_^ My therapist helps me with my depression. But reeling in Logan so easily, that's impressive! Keep going- and feed that muse of yours a cookie or two.
person Dark
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice add, Kurt's not in pain for once! I was kind of sad to hear that you're only gonna make a couple more chapters. Any news on what you plan on writing next, or is itecreecret? Or, heaven forbid, is there not going to be anything at all?
person sue sue magoo
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome!
And I meant it in the review- I only give credit where it's deserved.
Good chapter. I am really hooked on this story. Every single night I check to see if you've updated- and every time I see that it's not, I get upset; I'm way to attatched to this story.
I like how you portrayed Lance in this chapter. I've always though of him as someone who looks and acts (and pretty much is) tough, but is really a nice guy underneath, with good morals and all that.

Update soon!
person Tana
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is best X-men fic I"ve ever read! 52 chapters was pretty long to me at first, but now that I've finished them as fast as I did, I can't wait for more. Your characterization skills are very good- I could picture Kurt and Logan in the scenarios, no problem. From one author to another, I congratulate you and wish you the best of luck as you continue to write and eventually finish this story. What's going to happen to Trask? Man, I know I'd have a hard time not killing the heartless SOB. Sabertooth, too. Can't stand him hurting Kurt!

What inspired you to put Logan and Kurt together in the first place? I think they're cute together, kind of opposites, but why not some other pairing? Just curious, b/c most people couldn't pull this off as well as you have. Keep up the great work, Margay!
person Sue Sue Magoo
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
This is by far one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. You have managed to create a very unique plot and wrote it very well, all while keeping everyone in character. It is so hard to find a fanfiction like this one. I can only think of one other that deserves as much praise as this one.
Great job!
And I can't wait to read the next few chapters!!!!!!
person Dark
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so happy the story was updated! I was starting to go crazy from not reading this. you've got me addicted, should that concern me? It's too good to be wrong. But, I am kind of mad because I have to go away for a couple of days over spring break and I'll have no ss tss to a computer. I guess I'll have to go cold turkey on the story for awhile. I did consider going to a library or something and checking the updates on their computers, but I'd be too scared that someone would glance at the screen a read something about hot man lovin'. lol, anyway, can't wait till I can read again.
person TKD
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I've read the beginning of this epic and it looks like it's wonderfully well-done. I've gotta say that Kurt/Logan is one of my favorite pairings and I've not seen it done before in Evo. Unfortunately I'm not going to be able to read any further for the time being as it looks like this might be going in a somewhat similar direction to the monster I'm working on right now and I don't want to risk being influenced. I am, however, feeling a bit more inspired to go back to work on the Kurt/Logan I started ages ago and then abandoned b/c I thought it would be rather poorly received in Evo-verse - the number and nature of your reviews certainly prove that wrong. Anyway, wanted to drop a review to let you know that you have a really good style and a nice handle on the characters. Gotta love elf-torture! I really look forward to coming back and reading this through I' I'ne wne with my WIP.