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This has got to be one of the most impressive works of X-Men Evolution Fanfiction I've ever seen, especially in a yaoi sense with such an unlike combo! ^w^ I've adored reading this so far (can't.. keep.. eyes..open) And look forward to when I can catch up with the rest of it. The choice of words and the way it is all put together makes it so enjoyable to read, as well as the insight on emotions. And everyone has been kept so in-character, which is on of the most pleasing things, especially when there are so many fics out there that mangle the characters' personalities. It's been such a pleasure to read, and more addictive than a good book. (I'm so reluctant to close my window right now.. I've been reading for hours). I can't say much else, but please keep up the good work!

Me again. -Finally- caught up and finished reading chapter 60. The.. what's the word I'm looking for?... Finality of it... makes it seem like this is the end of the story..;-;. I never knew I could enjoy reading yaoi so much @_@. But your style and the way you keep the characters mostly the way they were orginally meant to be, keep the story flowing and changing just enough for things to stay interesting without getting out of hand... it's all been so much fun to follow. I would really hope this isn't the end of the tale, but if it is I guess I'll just have to look forward to your next story =P.

Again bravo! I like it is very cool you did an oncore. You public can never have too much Kurt and Logan. One question though? Why have you not included the wonderful prehensile tail in the love makeing. Hell if I had one I'd put that baby to us. Just a question. Till you next wonderful cha. ((. ((^^))

Kurt dominating Logan, now that's yummy. 2910 hits to this story, congrats.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO!
"HOT DAMN!" Dijon wooped in extacy, after reading one of the most intreging romances.
"Margay, i want you to know that the story was wonderful! please do another !" He thought, slamming a palm to the table, like that would get the message across.
his hands relaxed, letting the tension sink, the reason... because the most sexiest girl had just walked in, Shadow Fortune. What a braud, what a braud.

"What are you reading?" she sighed in anoy.
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Her eyes went wide

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"DIJON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Yatta for Kurt! He got to be "the man" for the first time. Hope it's not the last, cuz that was pretty hot. Good luck getting that dumb worm outta the computers. Stupid asses who create them. Anyhoo, I'm glad you're back. ^_^

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

It's so well written and the characters are utterly believable. well, except for the weepy-kurt chapters, but seeing that he'd just been brutally tortured and raped it's completley understandable that he wasn't his usual brash self.

I find this story slightly disturbing at times, extreemly interesting all of the time, and incredibly beautiful overall.

Thanx for writing it and I hope you have many more chapters in your little writer's heart.

PS. i can't spell, so please disregard all errors, sorry.
PPS: do you have anything published?

Again... beautiful! You are so right about a writer not trying to rush the story. It's hard not too, though. I had a vocablary brain fart when I chose the word smut, but nothing else came to mind. Sorry, it happens to the best of us. I'm just laughing at myself because I used the word exoncide to explain the elimination of dirt and grim but I could not think of a better word for sexual conduct than...smut. Okay, I'm going to give you the best complimet I think I've ever come up which so don't laugh. You know how you come out of a bad movie all you can do is talk to your friends about how bad it was and just laugh about it, and on the other hand yalk alk out of a movie theater when you watched a really great movie. You and your friends are quite, just thinking about that movie. That's the feeling I got after this chapter and probably the same feeling I'll get when I read the conculion of this story. So I hope your not laughing and I'll wait with baited breath for the next chapter. ((^^))

I know I'm long winded I really talk like this too.

Awww... That was soo sweet and fluffy. Hee. Hope you had fun on your vaca, though. I've haven't been up north in a few years. But I'm glad you're back. I was starting to worry about the story. Oh, and you too. ^_~ The session went surprisingly well- I was concerned for Cassie's safety if she hit a wrong button. But then I reminded myself that Kurt was there to tame Wolvie. Keep up the good work!

To hell with the laundry, you can e nae naked. no one can see you. To hell with the groceries, ramin noodles for all, and to hell with the filth of the house, think if you clean that filth how many new species you would be commiting genocide against. Please write your next chapter. I love your smut. Smut is a very bad word for what you write. It's beautiful and I only wish I had the time and dedication to put forth so much effort for my addoring public. Also the fact I have no addoring public but that is all the more reason why you need to post your next chapter sooner than later. For your fans. I'd kill for fans but than again if I did that what kind of fans would they be? Okay I'm rambling. I love this story. You give so much life and heart and emotion to these imaginay characters that I can only believe that they are real people some where in some distant demention or reality. Till your next awesome chater. REMEMBER SCREW THE HOUSE WRITE THE CHAPTER. ((^^))