rate_review Reviews

O.Othat was great. You should do more of these.

loved it! loved the remy chareacterasation! please try your hand at a remy/kurt! there are way to little of them...think about it...they are the only two people with physical mionsions! they fit! please please please!

Aw man, Todd had better thank Lance for this.*although I think Lancey-poo likes it just fine*
Anyway, nice fic, and RemyLance pairing is sweet.

FYI, the word chere is used only when addressing a female. Cher is used for addressing a male. (My mother was a French major, so I'm sensitive to language use. ;) ) Otherwise, the story was decent.

i loved this fic! it was wounderfully written! you kept the charecters realistic and wrote thelemon very tactfully. One pairing that i have yet too see is a Remy/Kurt. If you think you could extend your creativity to this i would be a very happy bunny!


keep writeing!!!!!
ME

...Wow....that's all I can really say right now. Let me wait a few moments to regain my composure...alright, all done! First off, being a langauge freak myself I like that you used chere instead of cher because IMO it works. Lance could definitly be the fem in the relationship with Remy. Secondly, wonderful as always and not too bad for your first slashyness. I very much enjoyed and I'm the one that brought this pairing up! I love you for dedicating it to me! And since I couldn't be the first to review I'm going to make sure that mine's the longest one. So I just have a few things to say. It was great. You did an awesome job for your first time you virgin! (LMand and that I expect to see more of your writings in the future, doesn't have to be Lamy (my new word for Lance and Remy, I know lame) but you just have to keep writing or I'm going to have to hurt you. Write more soon!

There, its the longest right? lol