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for The Forbidden Desire

by Janae

person DeanNSam
schedule July 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This story had so many levels of emotions, I LOVED IT!  Violet was refreshing and Logan's reaction to her had me rolling with laughter.  Calling Ororo "Oreo" and saying she was Logan's girlfriend. UGH the hope I felt! I desperately wanted her to call them mommy and daddy. 

The end took a drastic turn.  When he said he wanted to kill her I literally stopped breathing and whispered "Noooo".  I wish there was a sequel to this to end my pain for these two characters. THEY DESERVE HAPPINESS! Why didn't the professor interfere? Ororo is his baby girl and he should want to see her happy.  I've become to emotional over this story. 

Great story, loved it, and I hope to see a sequel one day even though this story is a decade old.  Better late than never.

D~ ♥♥♥

person Anon
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when r u going to update
person MarzBar
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how anybody resists Logan. I certainly couldn't do it if he came after me (like that would happen). Anyway, he is behaving like a blockhead. Hope you give us more of this story.
person Johnny P.
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it!
person Shay
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.......I like how your story is going so far, but how much longer is the past goin to be?I wanna see what's going to happen with Ororo and Logan already.
person Patricia16
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it It was hilarious when r u gonna update it e-mail me when u update ur ficcies
person Cre
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! Oh my God, this is terrific!! That last chapter had me holding my sides! Logan and Violet's exchange was absolutely priceless!! It was just too friggin' cute!! :D Please, I'm down on my knees... finish this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. ROTFLMAO!!!!!
person Shai
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the latest chapter--Violet is so cute.
person DAS
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd think I'd like som'more please.