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by sumthinelse

person loki
schedule January 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Could you do more chapter of fics with this couple? 

person Wolvertique
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thought I'd already reviewed this. I guess it was one of those "yeah, I'll get to it later" things and then I never did. Sorry about this. Funny, sexy, amusing, delightful. Could use a little technical support, but whose stories can't?
person Foof 76
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful fic!! I love your lemons, they are very sexy and steamy! Please update soon. I love the side story of Jean/Logan getting freaky. Now she needs to get him back and pin him down and violate him! :) yummy! (well, who wouldn't wanna do that to Logan?!)
person TKD
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know it's a good story when the second time through's just as good as the first. Any chance you'll let the bunnies go free and add some more to it? Or at least give us some more delicious action w/the elf? *g*
person Tique
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I was just sort of bored and looking for something to read and came along this. Nice job and the chapter titles made me laugh! By the way, "you are mine" in German is either "sie sind mein" (no 's'. formal) or "du bist mein" (informal).
person Tique
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and it's "schlafen sie gut".

Technically that's present tense--"Are you sleeping well?" but that's okay. I'm sure you aren't all that concerned with this kind of thing. Sorry to be such a pest!
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was great! More, quickly!!
person rubberduck
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. i'm sad it's only eight chapters. finished it too quickly. hope more is coming soon. i especially like how logan and jean are getting along. the power struggle between them is very hot. i eagerly await where kurt and kitty's relationship will go now. keep the chapters coming will you.
person TKD
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! An excuse to read this again. I'm a happy camper! Hope you're cooking up more fun with the elf! You're my most reliable source of good elf-fic, smutty or otherwise.*g*
person broken_oddity
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. i love it. keep up the great updates!