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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty good. you should do a sequel
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow its hard to find Ororo rape fics. I liked this alot. I could see this happening. write more please.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chilling... I always wondered what would happen if Toad came back. Poor Storm, though. Toad seems so self-centered that he doesn't remember he actually beat the shit out of her already before she electrocuted him!
Good work!
Good work!
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very chilling story.
Will there be a sequel of some sorts?
Will there be a sequel of some sorts?
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very chilling story.
Will there be a sequel ome ome sorts?
Will there be a sequel ome ome sorts?
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start! It's a little short though, even for a first chapter, so I'd like to see it fleshed out more. But still, I'm looking forward to finding out what happens! Brotherhood stories always have the potential to be fun, and there aren't all that many about Toad.