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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
May seem like a silly question, but where did chapter 25 go? Seems to jump from chapter 24 to 26, so now I'm a bit confused.
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
just a note... what big eyes you have is from little red riding hood, not goldilocks. otherwise, its great!
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April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
once again you have out done yourself. amazing story. the storyline was perfect just like the last. you have a great tt. t. keep writing more. i luv what you did w/ Rouge's mutation. ***** 5 stars for you
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February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think your stories are awsome.
I've read Forever and I'm reading Constant Craving,
where do you come up with these things!
Well as long as you keep writing em, I'll keep reading em!!
The Archer.
I've read Forever and I'm reading Constant Craving,
where do you come up with these things!
Well as long as you keep writing em, I'll keep reading em!!
The Archer.
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January 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if you even listen to reader reviews...but here goes anyway.
It's a nice, long story, and the characters are very well developed, although Jamie and Rahne are certainly active for their age (Isn't Jamie 12 or 13?). Can't really see anything that needs improvement, although I wouldn't mind seeing Cannonball (Sam Guthrie) introduced, espcially since it seems nobody uses him at all...but then again, there's no one left to pair him up with, unless you introduce some new evo-ized characterabitabitha is a basket case in aheap of trouble, and I don't think there's a Wanda in the story, and every other girl is taken, and none of the characters seem like the polygamy type).
Other than that, Please keep up the great work!
It's a nice, long story, and the characters are very well developed, although Jamie and Rahne are certainly active for their age (Isn't Jamie 12 or 13?). Can't really see anything that needs improvement, although I wouldn't mind seeing Cannonball (Sam Guthrie) introduced, espcially since it seems nobody uses him at all...but then again, there's no one left to pair him up with, unless you introduce some new evo-ized characterabitabitha is a basket case in aheap of trouble, and I don't think there's a Wanda in the story, and every other girl is taken, and none of the characters seem like the polygamy type).
Other than that, Please keep up the great work!