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for Serenada

by aranel

person Spade
schedule January 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey , this is good , can't wait for the next chapter! Rogue/Remy!
person GUB
schedule January 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good story, reeaaalllyy goooood! Does this mean your going to you you stories here now? I really hope you do cause I ve been thirstin for some more of your storys. Keep it up!!
person MizzMarvel
schedule January 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I joined tooooooo. Thanks for telling me about this. Sheesh. Anyway, I like this fic. You know I do. I told you so. But reviews are so nice, so I'll write one out anyway. Well, the use of the dream sequence was very clever. Here we are, thinking of course that this is mere mindless smut, and then suddenly you switch it all around and leave us with a very troubled (and amusing) Rogue, just trying to forget all this. And what's extra special is that this doesn't need some lame attempt at explaining how Rogue can control her powers, i.e., "And then Rouge [sic] kissed Scott. She did not know how it was possible, but she did it. And it was nice." You know how it is. Well, anyway, more please.
person AngeNoir
schedule January 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Not only was that sexy as hell, it was an entertaining read too! I loved Rogue's whole conflict of not being able to look her male teammates in the eye because of her dreams. And how she just kept bumping into one after another throughout the day. Man, if only I had such problems... ; )

Great writing! Hope there's more tme! me!
person Sydney
schedule January 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKE THIS. KEEP IT UP!