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for Serenada

by aranel

person JexyBaby
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know this was written such a long time ago that its very unlikely your ever gonna finish it, but I’m gonna review anyway, cause I LOVE this story! Damn, I’ve been in hysts sis since chapter one! These dream sequences are so amazingly steamy that I’ve had to hide the window every time my brother walks into the room! And Rogue’s panic attacks as she tries to hide from every single male in the mansion have had my crying with laughter! I soooo want you to continue this story – I mean, what does Logan have to do with this? If you have an unfinished draft somewhere or some other part to this story I would really love to read it. Pretty please?
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! keep writing! you're really talented!!!!!!!!!!
person Tique
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack! More!! This is really intriguing!
person Aliensexgoddess
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and your other story "Heaven Can Wait". Please update them soon!
person SheaStar
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. So what happened? Please continue.

Shea*
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this story... It'd be nice to see where else it could go... heh... anywho...
person KARINA
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey when are you gonna put chapter 4?
I've been waiting for mare than a month noe and still nothing, whats wrong?
This story is realy good and I like whauge uge is going through it gets people wondering in how many positions has she been in.
Aaaahhhh!! I wish I could have dreams like does.
Well come on with the next chapter I 'm gonna be bold if you don't hurry up with it!!
PLEASE HURRY!!! ~_~
person Rageful Jewel
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is a good fic. Feel sorry for Rogue. Having all those drams is not making her life any easier. I especially like the end of the third chapter. Bobby, Roberto and Ray laid back and relaxed for 15 secs and then all three shot up and went after her because of something Roberto said. Boys can be slow about things that are so obvious. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person KARINA
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
COME ON! I BEEN WAITING FOR HELL KNOWS HOW MUCH TIME!!!
PLEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ HURRY UP WITH THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!
(pleople just dont understand how much frustration they put other in when they do this)
I WANT MORE CHAPTEEEEEEERRRRRRRSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~_~ plezzzzz hurryyyyyyy
LIFE OR DEATH CASE HERE!!!
person ryonan girl
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I never thought I'd see this coming... Rogue's thoughts in this fic are very.. I don't know what word to use.. very genuine.. very real. It's impossible for any untouchable girl, or any girl for that matter, not to have such fantasies about the gorgeous guys surrounding her every single day... I really hope you'd update soon!